Before he went west, he was lead to where the book was. After he found the book, he wsa told to go west.

It's very good, except it doesn't explain how Eli knew Braille. But other than that, I like it.

This is a good begining to a good movie. You could lengthen it and make it into an actual story. The grammar and spelling is correct and i thank you for that. It is so hard finding good spellers these ,thank you for the good story and good grammar.

Oh wow, this was so good, just a question, you are saying that John became Eli? Okay, that's good. I have been back and forth on this site hoping that somebody would write a background story for Eli, how he became blind and everything else. Thank you.

That was very good. Lots of great discriptions. Though, I think it would have been perfect if you would have mentioned how he found the Book, but I guess that door can be opened in another story, perhaps? Nice, simple, story all-in-all.

Great story! :) I spotted some run-ons, but it's nothing major. I'm adding this to my faves. Keep up the good work!