Good fic. You got into Ziva's head very well. I liked this. I love the song too, thanks for introducing me to it.

"Maybe the truth serum wasn't as truthful as Saleem had thought." That killed me. Oof. Also her ending speech. Very powerful.

Oooo, I liked this. Nice job.

Like Like Like Love :)

This is fantastic. I really loved the ending. Excellent job!

*gushes* that was so beautiful!
(really don't know where they're going onscreen nowadays, at least there's fanfiction)

Very very good!

I'm not sure if you noticed, but you wrote "...and Ziva had told him a long time ago that the WOMAN he was becoming needed a woman."

really good one :) i wish the 2 of them could get their crap together and work out in both of their heads about this whole relationship deal... ya they both have a sketchy past with relationships, they both have these issues with their dads, they both have dead mothers, they both have a lot of things that make them protect their hearts more than anything but for christ sakes they need to figure it out before its too late and they dont have that luxury of later or tomorrow or another time... later could be to late, tomorrow might never come, and time does run out... thanks for the story :)

"that the woman he was becoming needed a woman."
-gigglesnort- I loved this fanfic, I just had to snicker at that mistake. c: Tony is becoming a woman? Since when?

Good story. I really liked the last paragraph.

I really enjoyed it! You made a few careless errors but besides that it was AWESOME!

Good take on how Ziva might have handled it.

Personally, I would rather she had kicked his butt but then I'm mean.

Your story is good!

I'd like to see some more if you are so inspired!

ok, that has to happen in the show :D

very much like this