|Reviews for The Josie Comier Way|
| Horch 5/30/12 . chapter 1
Great job! I love the idea.
The grammar can use a bit of polishing, though. In chapter three, you suddenly switched POVs in the sentence. The story was written in 3rd person POV, but you suddenly switched to 1st.
The spelling, too, needs a bit of improvement.
Is this an AU? Because in the last chapter of Nineteen Minutes (before the epilogue), Peter killed himself by shoving a sock down his throat. Also, Peter killed so many people that what he did was practically a massacre. Though it'd depend on where you're from, the charge for murder would be near lifetime imprisonment. The story was set in New Hampshire, which is why Peter would be dead by the time he could get out of jail.
Please continue! I want to see what will happen next. :)
| penpalwriter 5/12/10 . chapter 1