This is very well written for a first fic, howerer, you need to work on your punctuation.

Great Story! I hope you continue it. :)

I love the story so far and would really love to see it continued...Its a cliff hanger

Oh, well, now you've just left me curious. I hope I won't have to wait another two months for a chapter. This is very interesting and I can't wait to find out what happens. I hope there's a little Jules-owies involved (we're so sadistic with our heroes ;) Can't wait for more. Thanks,

jenben

I love the story I'm really hooked but I have been patiently waiting for more chapters but I can't wait anymore. And what's he and his friends "gifts" and how did they get them. Please, Please, Please! write some more for me I can't wait to see what's going to happen to Jules.

wow, this is really good. i haven't seen the show in about two years. fanfic is the only way for me to remember how they act. and i know that the way you write the characters is close to the show. so please keep writing.

I think this is a good story (hey, I've reviewed before, haven't I) but you might want to put some more organization into it. You jump around a lot from scene to scene and it might make reading easier if you, well, didn't do that so much. It might help if you let the rest of us in on what's going on. We have no idea what going on except Jules got kidnapped and so did his friends, but we've known that since the beginning. This story has so much potential and you're doing a great job (and I understand what it's like to have psycho AP teachers) but we need some action! Thanks for the fic,

jenben

I glad you are still working on this... short chapters are better than nothing

Hello!?! Big cliff hander. I am on the edge of my seat. Definitely want to see how it ends. And is Jules REALLY a young friend to rebecca?
She risks alot just for him?

Yes, my dear, that is every inch a cliffhanger. And if you don't add more soon I'm going to fall off! Really, this is going quite well but I would be quite as cryptic. Readers want to know why they've been kidnapped and what's up with the twins "gifts". Okay, maybe it could just be me, but technically, I'm a reader, too! Thanks for the fic and get more up soon!

jenben

yup, that would be a cliff hanger... please continue before I fall off

Yes, definately a cliff hanger.

I think you have something here and you should write more chapters. I was mesmerized by your first. Keep up the writing and continue to improve, good luck!

Wow, very good, i'd definitely like to know what happens next. Very Intriguing.

It's coming along smashingly (though you might wanna get it beta-ed), but more Jules!!! C'mon, cater to our neeeeeeeds! Okay, I'm done. thanks!!

jenben