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Reviews for: More than a wish
wildgoose 10/28/02 . chapter 1
Well done, ...I enjoyed her writings as a child as well.
Miyo86 8/29/02 . chapter 1
Funny Lol
Soliloquy Addams 3/9/02 . chapter 1
Very good. My favorites were the Barbies (so true, and it's hilarious coming from a child) and the dresses (yeah enjoy your nice monster suit, Grandma, how do you appreciate your present?)
runaround 2/10/02 . chapter 1
A alright story with a good idea behind it. I have two major points of advice. Daria, being the writer she is, would have probably written longer, more detailed diary entries, even at a younger age. You might want to go rephrase those, add some detail. My other advice: change the ending. Throughout the story you built up to what should be a good ending, then just kind of chopped it off. Be creative! Other than that, pretty good.
Ronin2 2/10/02 . chapter 1
Touching...'nuff said.
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