Nicely done. You've definitely crafted a strong story and I can hear the voices of the characters.

I hope you will be updating soon.

more please

Yes! This chapter was well worth waiting for! I'm glad to see Catherine's strong spirit is learning to deal with the wild feelings brought on by the " lioness ". Once she knows more how to control the anger she can learn from the " lioness " and she will be a better person because of it. It will allow her a closer bond with Vincent, as she understands more of what he has gone through all these years. So glad her idea to draw out the evil ones by going above did not end in disaster. The bond with her child grew stonger just at the right time. It helped Catherine and Vincent, working together, to rescue their son. I'm sure Catherine could feel it as Vincent held their son for the first time, and knew he was safe with his father. Would like to hear more of Vincent's reaction to seeing and holding his son. Now to get him safely back to his mother! And what about the men that were following Catherine? Did the police round them up, or did they get away again? Thanks for writing more of this great story!

Really looking forward to more.

Thank you for writing this story! I like this ending much better then Catherine getting killed. You have proposed an interesting dilemma for Catherine to deal with by giving her some of Vincent's wild side. I am looking forward to how she handles that. She is doing well so far, but what will happen when they find the child? Will her rage take over? Also interested in learning more about Ather. They need to find their son soon! Will be eager to see more of this story!

Looking forward to more.

Wish you had finished this it's good.

thank you for this tale!

This is a wonderful story. I never liked the way Catherine died in the series. This is a great alternative. Please post more. I hope you continue with this story.

JenB

I want to read more of this story please.

I Loved i hope you keep going with this story i can't wait to read more

I liked this story very much. I hope that you will continue to develop it. I am curious how you will handle the changes that Catherine will experience with more of Vincent's DNA flowing through her then existed during her pregnancy.

The character Ather, will you tell how he and Vincent met?

I will look for more...

Thanks

Vanessa