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Maerad-of-Pellinor28 10/10/11 . chapter 7
I'm glad you updated again, I got the email that said you updated I stopped what I was doing to read this because I love this story so much! I love the chapter also, it's so original. Do you still remember the basic plot? From your laptop, didn't it crash you said last time you updated. I always love your style of writing, it's descriptive enough to imagine the scene but not specific enough to be boring, to much detail can be boring sometimes. It also let's people use their imagination a little bit. I can't wait until you update again! Good luck with the other chapters, if you ever want any help with this story I can try, I like helping whenever I can, unless of course it's boring, but who likes boring things after all :)
CuteIsWhatIAimFor3 9/10/11 . chapter 6
Wow this is almost exactly the idea I had for a fanfiction and I love what you have done with it (don't worry I wont write it) I really hope you continue writing it. if not can you at least tell me/us where you were going with the story? it would be a shame to just leave it :) good luck!
writergirl123456789 9/2/11 . chapter 6
Please update soon, I cannot wait to find out what happens!
Ixiel 8/24/11 . chapter 6
I love it!

pellianor's sound so perfect )

i'm sure they'll get their chance!
WritingBookworm 7/6/11 . chapter 1
This is really good! Keep going!
RiotVann 7/2/11 . chapter 6
This is super duper awesome and unique! I'd love to hear/read more.
Maerad-of-Pellinor28 6/30/11 . chapter 6
Why did you have to do a cliff hanger? I hate cliff hangers! Okay, I think I made my point. Anyways, that was a great chapter! I was not expecting that at all! I got so excited when you updated again because I think it was like half a year since you updated or so. Please update soon this is one of my favorite stories and I get depressed when you don't update often :( and I don't like being depressed.
OMG-Bannana 6/30/11 . chapter 6
Interesting, can't wait for more! Update soon please!
I Am Number 9 3/29/11 . chapter 5
Love the story. Plz plz plz update soon
Maerad-of-Pellinor28 2/21/11 . chapter 5
Probably a good idea, I hhope it wasn't revenge, could it be a time turner? Great chapter I was happy to see that you updated!
Aria657 2/20/11 . chapter 5
What happened to her? Is this the stupid Slytherins plan? Gosh, poor Emma! I feel sorry for Starletta too... anyways, update soon please!
Aria657 8/24/10 . chapter 4
This seems pretty interesting, hope you update soon!
SilentAngel246 8/7/10 . chapter 4
OMG! i love this story! please update soon!
4-eyedDragon 7/23/10 . chapter 4
Oh boy...another Snape in Professor Grant...just what the world needs... Great job on the chapter, I really enjoyed it.
Maerad-of-Pellinor28 7/23/10 . chapter 4
Great chapter I'm so glad you updated!

I always try to help writers if I have any ideas so I have one idea and that's only to include more Starletta and Tarrin.

I liked how you wrote a passage of the book.

Please update soon!
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