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That was strangely hot for virgin sex. A good read! :D

haha good job! I liked it. You were very descriptive.

Oh my gosh, that was a great story, you need more reviews. You did a great job on it and it was so well written. I just finished the manga and this really works well with the ending. Course you had more detail. Love it!

Great story. Just enough released emotions that Winry and Ed probably have been holding. Great job.

Ha ha! Excellent last line.

I agree with everyone else, this was cute. :)

At first I thought Edward was just really out of character, makin' a move on Winry and all, but then you mentioned that he'd just decided to do this as a split second thing. That redeemed Ed's character. :) Nice job!

Hehe..his seed :D

Loved it!

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