ahahaha aww ash seems..sweeter? In a way more charming I like the brock part it was very payful .

ahahah I would yell PERVERT! (when he said "admiring her beauty") Lol i cant believe ash nis saying this so calmly

...touch her? WTH ASH? XD hehehehe

HAHAHAH! ASH HOLD UR HORMONES! Hes such a guy . ...wait...WHAT ARE U DOING MISTY O.O/(HAHAHAHAHAHAH I LOOVE WHAT ASH SAID AHAHAHAH "Yeah Misty, take it off!" whats wrong with him ; XD)

...WTF? ASH WHY DID U SAY THAT! THATS SO NASTY!

Greatest one shot ever! It was hilarrious!

that was compleately retared

I thought that was a little weird...um...

Well, that was ok, but it would have been better if it was slower and more romantic.

bye-bye!

DrunkaHomestar

*snicker* Poor Ash... His hormones got the best of him XD *gigglesnortlaugh*

tehehehehehe! I didn't expect the lil "scene" to happen

*Just sits there and laughs*

lolsies! v. funny!

The muscles in my face have become numb._

Let's just say that my face kinda hurts now. :-D

Good one. Got a kick out of it. XD

so was the first part of Misty pretending to be Brock and Misty admitting she loves Ash all a crazy dream Ash had and he woke up thinking his dream was real and did... that. Really funny and strange story specially the ending words when Brock saids Ahhh, to be 15 again. That leaves a scary image in mind.

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL! THAT WAS FUNNY! *slaps Ash across the face* WHAT A PERV! Oh well, I still hate cha ash! *looks at the people who are stareing at Kit* I uh...HE'S U.G.L.Y!

Hiya, I know I've read this before (it's Coolie, remember me?), but I would like to review it here.

This story surprised me at first, seeing Ash being written about with a very different characteristic, but it makes for a funny story.

LOL! OMG, THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY! NICE JOB!

LOL!OMG! That was sooooo funny!LOL! *gives togepretty a high five* That was good!lol!

:) nicole