Luke Brandon is more than aware of the fact that his wife cannot cook. One of the great things about the series is how much Bex tries to cover up-only to have Luke bemused and seeing right through her crap.

This is overall a cute story, but give Luke a little more depth and things to do besides go to and come from. Also, what people do and like when they are in their twenties are not the same as what they do and like in their forties. While Bex might still be a shopaholic, her tastes would have changed (just like they did when she got pregnant.) Show this.

Lastly, give Minnie her own personality. Maybe she's mostly like Bex, but she would have some Luke in her too!

Keep at it, and good luck!

Wow! This is really good! You write just like Sophie Kinsella. I'm totally hooked on this story :) Keep updating :) x

Becky didn't change at all. :D And Minnie is just too much like her mother. Poor Luke. At least they have only one daughter.

Jess is pregnant? It's a little late for that. Jess is two years older than Becky and Becky had Minnie when she was 27. If Minnie is 18, that makes Becky 45 and Jess 47. I doubt that an intelligent woman like Jess would take the risk of having a child so late. When the mother is older than 40 one third of the babys are born disabled. I'm sure Jess would know that.

Ohmygod ! Its written just like the original ! Awesome work here ! I love it , love the shopaholic series :) except sad that the fact that the characters are old :( i dun wan them to be that old ... :(

Wow! I'm - I'm impressed! You really got Becky's and Luke's personality SPOT ON! It's amazing. You write just like Sophie.

Great i love this great twist on shopaholic ! two times trouble. minnie finally grown up. brilliant plot. i love it cant wait for more.

Ooooh! What kind of business? I can't wait to read more! :)

becky doesnt swear dat much in reality...its luke who does it...! so plzzz remove it...! it makes the whole story very indecent...!

This is so good, I am still waiting for Sophie Kinsella to bring another one out! Amazing for our first FanFiction! Loved it, great job. You really portrayed the characters well. You have a very similar writing style to Sophie. Great work! I really enjoyed it!

These sound just like the books!

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Omg, you have me freaking out!

Yay!, Suze!

Wow did you update 3 chaps? Awesome. And I like your Luke. Very... Luke-ish haha.

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This is great! I mean, it's well written, just awesome and you really caught the personality of Becky!

You'll be hearing more from me, yes, definatly. But I am dissapointed that they didn't have another baby. Do you think you could squeeze another annoying sibling somewhere in here? Lol.

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