This story depicts love in reality. We can't fully give everything to the person we love, but the things we love about them, just seeing them is enough rather than expecting fake ideals that doesn't defin what's within. Great story. One of the cutest, and best ItaSaku I have read.:D

Cute and fluffy. Nicely done. 3

this is just as sweet as how it is :")
Very nicely written, and I love you :)

Hahaha awh. That would so be them(:

Cuuuute. :D

Your stories are amazing! :D

Hey, just thought I'd let you know that an old friend of mine plagiarized your story. It's on LiveJournal and it's friends-locked (I believe), but if you wanted to know, the author's username on LiveJournal is charunde and the story's still up. I don't think she checks her LiveJournal account anymore, but if you're ever interested in contacting her, you know where to go.

I'm sorry for the lack of any real enlightening comments in this review, but I have nothing to say except: I love this. Thanks for writing!

That was awesome! I think I might cry

This was cute (:

AWWWWWW!

You are a crazy amazing author.

Maybe it's because it's late into the hours of the AM and I'm happy in a slightly-neglectful relationship, but the way you characterize these people and their interactions really touches me.

Really, I'm commenting because of what you wrote in your a/n: "...i want to be able to captivate my readers with something more meaningful..."

I don't know if you'll even see this, but I want to tell you that you do.

This story, for example. The simplicity in their relationship, the quiet understanding, the satisfaction in the little yet meaningful actions - all is beautifully put together.

My favorite story, however, really isn't this one. It's the one titled 'locking rhythm with hearts'. Like all lonely people searching for fellow loneliness, I can only be amazed by how perfectly analogous this is to my life. Maybe I am only desperately searching for the hope that there can be happy endings and that my own efforts aren't in vain, but still. The reassurance within those words bring me hope. Thank you.

Please, never stop writing.

beautiful

I love this story so much, I even saved that page.. You're a brilliant writer.. I love the way you made up Itachi, him and his realistic view of life and love is simply satisfying..

Amazing as usual! Write more Itachi fics...biggest fan.