|Reviews for Receiving Grace|
| Jessica 7/5/10 . chapter 17
Aww, that's cool that Robert and Susan are actually related! Through Edmund and Georgie's marriage, I mean. At least, I'm assuming they were married... I think you said as much, but I can't remember.
This was a really sweet chapter! The whole of it was very heartwarming. I wonder who the person at the door is! Oh well, all will be explained... I think.
Thanks for explaining why Phillip wanted to see Edward.
And Susan's pregnant! Yippee!
At first, when I saw the "cousin died in a train wreck", I thought that Jill might have been the cousin. But, obviously not. :)
I can't believe this is the second-to-last chapter! I want this story to drag on a little longer!
| Firiena Brisingr 7/4/10 . chapter 16
that is truly beautiful! i hope susan and robert and edward can go to "true narnia" one day :)
| TheHappiestGirlOnEarth 7/3/10 . chapter 16
I love it! please update soon!
| UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND 7/2/10 . chapter 16
hmm... trilogy? whats the third title? update soonz plz!
| Jessica 7/2/10 . chapter 16
Nice title for a chapter that ties up LOTS of loose ends. So, that's why Robert was a little disoriented when Susan named her son Edward George. I like all the tie-ins! That's a strange way to go and come from Narnia...
It's sad that George died, though.
Where is Phillip going to come in? I'm really curious, as I don't like him and get nervous when he's NOT around. If there's a wasp in the room I'd like to be able to see it. And, maybe, just maybe, he'll be in the sequel to the semi-sequel!
| Aisie 7/2/10 . chapter 16
This story is soooooo good! I love it! :D
| Blonde Pickle Mule 7/2/10 . chapter 16
I was right! Robert actually went to Narnia at one point! The story of the battle was so heart-breaking, I couldn't imagine leaving Narnia at a time like that, it would be terrible! I love how their stories fit together so well, and I guess that makes Susan a reinstated friend of Narnia doesn't it?
Such an adorable chapter, and I love that you've decided to make it into a trilogy! Can't wait for the next part (last one! NOOOOO!)
| The Madman From The Bronx 7/1/10 . chapter 15
Wow, what a cliffie! PLEASE update soon. :D
| Jessica 7/1/10 . chapter 15
Ooh! Good. I like the end of the chapter- almost a cliffie! And the scene with Philip was good too- telling Edward about his real father. Something he'd have to know eventually. Susan was very... bold with her threats, though. And I certainly hope that Philip doesn't make good on his threat to claim Edward as his son... why would Philip want him now? What's changed?
I like Robert threatening to kill someone. I always like male characters (and people in reality) who defend women and helpless children like that. Philip has no right to Edward or Susan- besides, Susan's married to Robert. Maybe Robert should legally adopt Edward, just in case, though. I dunno, it's your story, do what you want, though.
One more thing: I find it strangely odd that Susan doesn't have any more children and isn't pregnant after being married to Philip for five years. That just seems off the mark a bit. I kept reading and expecting to see a mention of another child... but I never did and felt slightly surprised that there were none. (This is a not-so-subtle hint: Please, please, put more bairns into the story?)
| Mighty Lion 7/1/10 . chapter 15
Voyage of the Dawn Treader comes out the day after my birthday! Soo excited :) So the man Susan recognized in her dream was Robert then? And he's been to Narnia? Eeeep I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Annabell Black 7/1/10 . chapter 15
I KNEW that Robert went to Narnia! I just knew it! I am dying for the next chapter!
| Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyper 7/1/10 . chapter 15
YAY! Another update! So, I definately liked the Philip drama, and think that it was good to throw that back in there-their lives would seem too humdedum without some kind of drama,and baby daddy drama is always good for some tension! xD Heehee. I absolutely LOVE little Edward and Robert both,they both just make me want to hug them! And the idea of Susan telling Edward about Narnia was too sweet! I cant wait for the next chappie to see what happens with Roberts realization! And with that last little bit of your authors note-'but theyre coming'? I have to know what you mean by that, and the only way to figure out is if you UPDATE! That being said..UPDATE! xD
| more than meets the eye 6/30/10 . chapter 15
Robert is the little boy from the side-stories isn't he! The feild with the pond he ended up in was one of the same ponds Digory Krike and Polly Plummer went through...that would explain how he got to England in the first place (if Robert is infact the little boy. The little boy also seemed to have developed a crush on Susan when he saw the statue of her. AND the little boy was quick to judge Edmund when he heard the tale of his treachery as Robert was quick to judge Philip.
If Im wrong about this how in the world does Robert know about the Kings and Queens of old and of Narnia...well if I am wrong Ill read the story more carefully...and when it's not 2 in the morning
| HereComesTheSun21 6/30/10 . chapter 15
He knows! Oh my gosh, he knows! I was shocked when it turned out that it was Robert's brother that went to Narnia. (George is Robert's brother, right? I'm not just remembering incorrectly?). That was a nice twist.
Susan and Robert are married now! Hooray! But then Phillip showed up. I deeply dislike Phillip. Luckily it seems as though he won't be bothering them anymore.
I still can't get over the fact that he knows. Please update soon so that we can see how it all turns out
| UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND 6/30/10 . chapter 15
DUN DUN DUN! And all that time, she didnt want to tell him, and he already knew! oh, the irony!