a quand le prochain chapitre sil ta plaiiis c vraiment bien !

This was cute, but a little slow, to be honest. I feel like we're going off course to the core plot. Is Autumn coming soon?

Well then, you'd think the woman would have more respect to their superiors. XD

Okay, so this woman wasn't Yumemi? XD Darn.

Aww... ;A;

Yeeeppp. Now I'm definitely convinced about my first thought; Mime is Yumemi.

For a while, I was thinking Mime was Yumemi dressed as a man. Hmm... I'll keep that in the back of my mind. All in all, well done.

Yes, this is definitely interesting! I'm eager to read more, so I hope you don't mind the brief reviews!

Ohh... I thought, at first, she was going back in time, but I suppose not. This will be interesting, indeed. Nicely done; it's hard to see Munto going with another woman, but I'm glad something is nagging him about Yumemi's existence.

I'm not sure if this will do any good, reviewing in English, but this has an interesting beginning.
I'm curious to what's to come, however, a little weary, for such "weakness," which you speak on Munto's behalf, I believe, actually makes him stronger. What would become of him, if she is gone? She is also the key to the Akuto, too... but I'm getting too far ahead. I'll keep on reading and see how things go.

I don't speak French - but I was interested in the size of this fanfic, so I decided to try and Google-Translate the whole story. Even though Google Translate did have a hard time with genders and some things - I stuck thru all 15 chapters and can't wait for more . I am enjoying your story - even though I know it would be better if I spoke/read french, lol! Très bien!

est ce que tu pourras faire la suite stp on attend toute avec impatience

J'aime énormément Munto et je suis heureuse que tu ais écrit une fiction sur ce manga aussi belle et intéressante !
J'ai hâte de lire la suite,bon courage !

tres bon chapitre vivement la suite

j'adore ton récit surtout ne t'arrète pas de l'écrire.j'ai vraiment hate de lire la suite