This was wonderful.

D'awww... This whole thing was freaking cute! I love Souji x Dojima family fics SO much and I think this one's my fave so far! Goshdarnnit, I know this'll be one of those fics I go back to read months from now because it's so good. The last chapter with the birthday card made me tear up, and the event with the weapons? Epic! Why didn't the game think of that? Maybe they'll put it in Persona 4: the golden..? (crosses fingers). Gosh, this makes me want to try my own DojimaxSouji family fic, even if it'll never be as awesome as this one xP

Anyway, you did an amazingly perfect job on this fic and I must thank you for writing it! Please keep up such awesome work with whatever other stories you choose to write :)

I'm a bit confused by the very last section of this chapter? This is a great story though! I'm almost disappointed that it's marked as Complete.

I think this is a very nice little story. I liked the moments with Souji the best. You characterized them all very well! The Galactic Punt at the end also rather amused me, and I liked the style of the overall writing.

"we can be a family together"...*sniff*

this story is pure awesomeness

never thought of souji not having a real family, but it sounds pretty plausible i think i really doooooooooo love ya ;)

I love it! The best family story circling around Doujima, Souji and Nanako. They make quite the family. Reading this makes you see what Doujima thinks, a see through of who Souji is. So cute!

T-this was so BEAUTIFUL. Jesus. For o moment i thought my heart wouldn't be able to take it. Author, you were wonderful, with your perfect characterization of the family and all the rest. I cried so hard SO EASILY at the end it's not even funny lol I love you and your story. Bawwww brb crying a bit more ;3; Just, precious I'm glad i was able to read it :'DDD

I have no words to describe how awesome this is. :D

...This is the first time I nearly cried when reading a fanfic.

Really, that was just spectacular.

Souji... You... T_T

I liked this!

Very good about Souji and his Dojima!

(T_T) I love Dojima so much, and I like how I get to see Souji from his eyes. It's always an interesting point of view.

For some reason I can't picture Souji saying 'uncle' and not 'Dojima-san'. Still, I'm very curious as to your other-world tie-in with Dojima and I look forward to any other chapters.

So sweet, I love this. I wish you didn't stop at four chapters. I like this Souji you've given personality to.