I read this story long ago, but apparently forgot to review. I like this story very much. The tension between them is good, and I like the ending a lot.

Yeah! The first Han/Leia m on this site! Waho! You might want to put the characters on it so other people can read it. I loved it! Yeah!

Really sweet story. I think the in bed scene was a bit much, but other than that I liked it,

Hello :)

That was an interesting predicament you get them into :) good twist and nice characterizations!

Keep up the great job!

Love

Mireille X

A wonderful story! Welcome to my favorites! You've earned a fabulous nine out of ten! Though the plot was indeed creative and original, but the resolution was a bit unresolved. Other than that, this was great! Thanks for writing a GOOD fanfiction!

Very nice story. I thought the exploration of their relationship was perceptive and nicely done, although the dramatic devices (the Apox virus, Leia being conveniently 'drugged') were a little contrived. If you were revising it, I would suggest lengthening the showdown in the bunker, as it is too short to properly build up tension (although Han's emotions when he thinks she is dead are well rendered), and maybe adding more of an argument back on the Falcon, as I agree with your other reviewers who have suggested that she should be angrier. For all that criticism, I really enjoyed reading your story and I thought some of the dialogue was excellent - very authentic sounding.

Wow! That was great! Very well written. And suspenseful too. Great job.

Cute. I like the last bit the best. It's always interesting to "see things from a child's eyes."

now this is a good story. it would make a great movie! great lesson about dont judge a book by its cover.

Very well written-love the use of vocabulary! Plotting is well done, emotions are believable. Please keep writing!

Good story! You've done a great job on the characterizations. I'm glad Leia recovered her memory in time to remember the night with Han! :)

That was absouluty enchanting and beautiful.. Bravo. Truly Captivating..

sweet monkeys! I liked it!

kool story. a little raunchy, but nontheless kool.

Sweet. And, actually, more believable

than the canon stuff.