Awh, I wish you hadn't abandoned this story. It truly had potential and I really liked it. :(

*sigh* Well since it has been over what... eight years since you last updated I doubt you're ever going to finish. Too bad this story really held a lot of potential. Thanks for uploading the small part of this story that you did.

KumoriKageshi

Please , please you can't leave this story here. Please write more to this story.

Can he see James through the invisibility cloak or is he just looking up? Will Harry get any new powers? Will he become an Animagus? I'm hoping that Harry will remain closer to Sirius then to James. I like having Sirius as Harry's father real or surrogate. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

you should not have abandon this story it is really good

Umm... sorry to bother you but... it's been -what- 4, no 6 years! Are you going to update? Or our you going to put this up for adoption?

I review to EVER story that I read and I like them all and this is a

vary good story. Here is where you can inprove.

- more chapters

- up-date more (I mean you have not up-dated since 3/6/02)

i love this story. when are you going to updait it though it has been forever.

I really hope this story is not abondoned! I can't wait to see what happens next!

please update soon!

Quite believable, though AU. I'm sure many people have asked you this, but why wasn't James buried?

Harry's not really smart, he's capable and a good flyer. But of course he's in Gryffindor! :P James was just too caught up with the intelligence thing, but if Lily was in Gryffindor being that smart... Hermione too.

Hm, why was Harry hurt? I don't remember, but I haven't read the books in a while, too busy with fanfic, heh.

you are a really good writer. i hope you update this fic soon.

SO Amazing!

It's absolutley incredible! I love your writing! Update soon please! only two days until HP7!

omg! this is fantastic! I love all of your stories (big fan!)

thanks so much and please update soon!

you're such a wonderful writer! uptade as soon as you can please! i love all your fanfcis they're great!

wow i must say that your probebly one of my favorite authors that i read stories from and i dont know hwy but i didn't see this story when i look through. i love this one some much alsong with both the second chance once. there great i really wish that this one would update i love this story! if you could are you going to keep writing this one or is it one that your finished with or something? again love the stories cant wait to read the updated ones!