   Flanagan96 5/16/10 . chapter 3good |
| raincaster 5/13/10 . chapter 2 reminded me a little of lion king... that's a good thing though! that is one of my favorite disney movies! |
| RayzeXatus 5/13/10 . chapter 2 Suspenseful stuff man! I have no idea where this is going, but the writing is great. |
| chawk1993 5/10/10 . chapter 1 Well done! Very well written! |
| Bigoldfrog 5/10/10 . chapter 1 Hints of an epic story to come are deftly sown in this enlightening yet easy to follow first chapter. Nicely done |
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