That is so sad. It's heartbreaking.

Oh, God, that was more than awesome! I loved it so much, you could just feel the feelings, the angst and love. *_*

This leaves me with fresh tears in my eyes at the achingly haunting scene woven from your words.

2 words: beautifully descriptive. :D

I dont' know what scenery you had in your head, but your very first words created a lovely image in my head. A circular stone tower with winter still outside of it, and this magnificent bed on one side of the room. This was a lovely fic and I love it.

Aww! Beautiful and wonderfully descriptive and deep! I loved it!

this was actually the first fic of yours that i read (on Pure Magnetism) but the last one i'm reviewing.

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i thought that you got into Harry's head really well, as with all your other fics that are in first person. and i suppose it's kinda sad that they aren't exactly intimate and 'loving', so to speak. but it was well written and this one-shot got me to reading your other stories.

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blame luck, i guess, for getting me to find this accidentally on Pure Magnetism. but sometimes luck can be wither a good or bad thing...bah, i'm babbling now. i'll see you in future reviews. happy writing. ta.

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Speechless with amazement.

It is a little rougher than the other ones. But as always,a "good read".

I don't know whether to be happy... or sad. It's got me all confused inside. But thats what I love about this one particular fic, it kind of... stands out from your other ones. And I love it.

I've always wanted to comment on your writing skills, at the ease you write metaphors and the detail and the emotions you express so wonderfully. But... theres never a way I could express that. If you could only see mine, or any of your readers, faces after they finish reading one fic or one chapter you have written... then you might fathom the mere emotions that swallow us whole. I wish I could explain it better, but I can't.

But I loved this one, it was different from your others, and so exceptionally wonderful that it makes me want to weep with some unknown emotion. Please keep writing.

hmmm... they always say actions speak louder then words. Nicely written, I like how you did Harry's POV. I hope you write a sequal to this, I think it would be a nice conclusion.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You completely got inside Harry's head and showed us his thoughts and feelings without making them sentimental or adding honey to soften their harshness and their stark honesty. You showed us what it could truly be like between Harry and Draco.

Am looking forward to reading the rest of your works.

This is very very good. And extremely heartrending. A bit lost for words now in the face of the power behind yours. You use such illustrative imagery, and you have a way with words. "We are not intimate. By now we know every inch of each other's bodies" That line struck me as extremely telling. A beautiful piece of fiction.

Oh my. For the past few days I've been seeing your name all over the place. 'Penguin' this and 'Penguin' that. And now I know why. This is breathtaking. I've also written a Harry-watches-Draco-sleep ficlet, but it's nothing at all like this. This is harsh and wistful and *honest* and ... wow. I can't wait to check out your other stuff.

Oooooooh, cool! How utterly poetic you are, Penguin! I must learn from you! ;)

superhan (or just Han)