that did not sound like the story Bella told Edward did it

Interesting reading this side of the event. Thanks for sharing.

I've always suspected that readers negative feelings about Renee colored the few stories featuring her. She's usually portrayed as a selfish flake, but Charlie had to have seen some good in her, right? At least your story is more balanced and fair. Insights are good I always say. Thanks for these.

Renee is evil!

I know she was depressed and that Charlie shoud've done much more, but taking away his baby... I don't know.

I can tell you that it was amazing and that it captivated me thoroughly (I hope I speled it right)I was able to feel the pain and loos Charlie went through, and I was very mad with Renee. Of course I don't know what it feels like because I don't have children of my own, but I think that taking away a child or feeling the way Renee did towards Bella muct be awful.

Thank you very much for sharing, I know it's not my place to do it, but I feel like it... I enjoy it very much

Loved it I actually started tearing up during lol but it was reli amzing