I just finished reading the book, and your story is really good just how I wanted the book to end :)

Aww. That was really cute.

Everything in this story was so rushed.

If it was more detailed and drawn out, I would have enjoyed it more.

2/5

Awe!

I like the first chapter.

It was sort of rushed though.

It summarized the book the first paragraph.

Then boom, Liza is proposing. Rushed.

Too bad it wasn't more drawn out.