Sad and beautifully warm at the same time. This is excellent writing: characterisation, pace, style, emotions... everything.

This was beautiful. And painful. And all the conflicting emotions that make up Tiva. And I loved it. Bravo.

Really loved it :) Nice take on season 7...

Good job. Still depressing but with the dawn of daybreak in the distance.

Good & depressing. You've got a talent.

Ok depressing as all hell. Good writing though. Just thought I would give a little feedback before I moved on to your next chapter or walked into the desert to let buzzards have their way with me.

late finding this third part, sorry

very much liked the gentle, tentative tone

OH my, was that the end? No, no, no. You must write more! Must. ... Please?

Absolutely wonderful :] Who doesn't love a good ansty Tiva story? No one I know, have ever known, or will ever know will ever dislike it.

I'll sum it up in two words: Touching & Flawless.

perfect. beautiful.

absolutely perfect and beautiful.

Please finish...

PERFECT!

Seriously! Absolutely wonderful! You had such beautiful imagery that it nearly made me weep from the picture that was being painted in front of my eyes. You really know your way around words don't you, I see that you are good friends. :D (Yeah, I have had too many energy drinks today).

I love the idea of them hooking their fingers together for reassurance, really well done. I can definitely see that happening because it is so very intimate without being to flashy, which is TIVA.

Great job, this was a wonderful little fic and I enjoyed reading it very much. :]

Turns out you are an absolutely brilliant motivator (though it did take me a while to actually get around to cleaning but I did) Now you are my motivator for doing my paper. I am currently over halfway finished with it, and after I finish another page I get to read the next chapter of this (and I believe I will finish that page in no time because I am antsy to know what happens next!).

This was an absolutely perfect take on Tony's thoughts after Obsession. Your brilliance astounds me, and I commend you on an absolutely amazing job. I look forward to more, as you probably know by now because I do very much adore your work (so much so that I am smiling too widely right now).

Kudos to another job well done. :]

Loved every moment of this. You did such a great job. And after the up and down, out of character, downright craziness going on between them at the moment, stories like this help me sort it all out in my head. (Because I'm at a loss to explain it on my own.) I really think this is more faithful to the characters than what we're being officially served. Gorgeous.

And I hope your plague is clearing up.

POOR ZIVER! I can't wait to read more of this, you have effectively captured my attention yet again. :]

Great job, good introduction, and now I am going to go clean before I reward myself with another one of your chapters/ :D

i hope they can fix it... great chapter, cant wait to see what comes next