Awesome. Loved it.

Loved it! (And how you added in all that Astrid/Hiccup)

This is another one of my favrote stories, the Hiccup and Astrid parts were personaly my favrote since they are my favrote charecters. I can't wait till your next story.

Cute I do love this ship!

I'll start off by saying that this is one of the two stories that got me to ship RuffnutXFishlegs.

Anyway, you wrote a pretty good story here. Everyone was in character, the plot was well-thought out, the writing was good, it's playful, and it's generally fun to read. The writing is up to snuff, as well.

Awesome! I loved the whole fanfic _

Wow...sounds like MY mind right now except that I'm simultaneously playing Ruffnut and Fishlegs. P Great story...I was giggling the whole way through. I love how awkwardly teenager-ish it is...two kids totally crazy about each other but have no way to say it. Too bad relationships don't come with a walkthrough or a manual...I'd buy one! Great story!

Good! Really believeable situations and characters, particurally Fishlegs. Well done!

Great story. The spelling and plot is great and the story is frightiningly realistic. At least from the girls perspective. The guys side was a stereotypical, but not horribly. I give this story a 10/10.

hell hath no fury like a woman(Or hiccup)scorned.

I am not offended. If its the truth, Its fair game in my book.

You seem to know just what us guys do in relationships. Just tune out...

I normally give my review at the end of the story, but I couldnt help it. That is one of the funniest, most awkward (for fishlegs)things I have read recently.

It's from the movie Hook. The first line is Smee and the second line is Captain Hook.

"Captain! Captain! I've just 'ad an apostrophe!"

I do believe that this quote is from Hook! LOVE THAT MOVIE

And while we're on the topic - LOVE THIS FIC! It's so funny and cute - I think you've really hit Fishlegs' and Ruffnut's personalities dead on.