At least Yami is in a hospital..

I love how people think Yami and Yugi are brothers :D

Dude, this story ROCKS :3 update..please?

:( Yami"s a mess!

I love your writing style, its addicting to reead(:

This is SOOOO good :D i love it!

Ohh,, plot twist(:

Hi. I really like the story so far and am definitely going to keep reading. I do have one note, though. I'm only mentioning this because you used it twice, but 'apathy' means lack of interest or concern. So when you say that Solomon's eyes were "ablaze with concern and apathy" it's a little confusing. I think the word you're looking for might be empathy. Well anyway. other than that minor point, great work. can't wait to read more (which is what I'm gonna do right now).

it was great l hope yami pals threw hope you update soon

Oooooh, so far I'm reaaaally liking it! Nicely detailed! And poor Yugi. I just wanna hug him! And Yami too! T.T

I can't wait till they see each other, even though they are both in horrible shape. I can't wait!

-kairi

please don't give up this story...it got my crying...I would really love to know the ending! you're really good at writing, even if I don't understand all the words, cause i'm italian! but please! I love your story so much! thanks for writing it!

You are such an amazing writer with so much talent! Your words flow beautifully together, and provide so much detail and perfect vision of what's happening, I feel as though I'm really there! I can't wait to read more! You're work is amazing and I hope you will continue to do beautiful things. :D

-Kemmeyz

Good job on the chapter! I am really liking this story so far! XD Keep up the good work!

This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a while! Don't stop writing, we're all avidly waiting for the next chapter!

Love it, not quite the way that I would have written it, but still very good, (Probably better than what I had in mind)

Sorry if I sounded like I was rushing you. But I can tell that this is going to be a good story.

And I can't wait for the next chapter!

Kewl chapter I love this story!_

eeeeeeeeep! yami ;-;

Some stories you just give up on. The stories that havent been updated in months or even years, yet you still read what the author already has and just make up your own conclusion. I have to say when I saw this had been updated, I was both surprised and confused. Surely this would be one of those, 'I'm giving up this story' notices. But it wasn't. It was a real update. ANd when you see an update to stories you've given up on, there's just no way to explain that. I understand being to busy to write often, but please squeeze in time whenever you can. It'll make those moments of given up worth it.

your perfectly fine i love to abuse my favorite characters too lmao