D: oh, wow, i liked it really bad. rly, i loved it 3

Charlie here reminded me a little bit of Hargid and Aragog. Enjoyed it!

I really enjoyed reading this. Everybody seemed in character and the interactions between Bill and Charlie are great. There were a few times where I giggled out loud. This is a really cute story and i am glad i read it.

I loved it :)

My two favorite characters! Very funny.

This was funny. I like the relationship between Bill and Charlie, and the line Charlie wanted to add to the letter saying they didn't know the Weasleys.

This was cute. Your Charlie is always so vivid, and BigBrother!Bill was just spot-on. Loved the concept - hiding a dragon, too!

Well, well done! I chuckled out loud at a couple of places (like Charlie wanting to put the note on Esmeralda about it not having anything to do with the Weasleys)

You do such a great job of painting the characters of the Weasleys

How can you be unsure of that? It was hilarious! I loved it! You did a good job incorporating the prompt. That poor chicken! I felt more sorry for it than I did the boys. lol.

It's really cute, one can see why Hagrid approved of Charlie.

Charlie and Bill are hilarious together.

"What if it ate one of the other kids? I mean they wouldn't miss Percy too much, but you know they would notice if the twins turned up missing."

That whole quote was hilarious.

"You can fix it, right?" Charlie asked holding the charred bird out of the water.

"If you mean adding parsnips and serving it as a meal, then yeah."

Of course, brothers can fix any and everything. Funny line that. And the part of ...she's not my girlfriend...is just too cute and right for the age. good job.

Oh, this is just hysterical. I can totally picture this happening. Brilliant. (I just adore that he named the dragon after his girlfriend!)

I really enjoyed this. I loved how Bill and Charlie had the brotherly love going. Great job on this!

The boys were hilarous together, there was some very funny lines in there. ;P