Whilst terribly sad, this really is one of my favourite One Piece fanfics, it's beautifully written. :)

I had lots of sleepless nights trying to read all of this, and it was completely worth it. I wanted to beat up Tesla everytime he did something(Not the eyebrow! It better grow back!), I cheered when Merry came back and I was even more happy when they or away(or did they...D:). It took me awhile to realise that the perspective of the last chapter was a dog, but I laughed when I did.

Now I need to read that sequel...

Oh, wonder what powers they will get?

It felt ironic for me that the fanfic I started reading (to have a break from writing a scientific report) contained many (albeit coldhearted and stereotypical)scientists. Although I initially intended on reading one chapter for now, I read the entire story! Also glad to see there is a sequel -I really wanted to know what happened after they reached land. There were some really heart wrenching and significant moments, like when Nami and Sanji started refering to themselves as numbers, portraying their mental defeat. I like how the Going Merry has a real soul and saved her 'sneaky thief'. That was truly heart warming. The 'surgery' did make me wince at times,though I'm sure that was the desired effect. Oh yeah, and the scientists' names made me smile, though I hope in the future karma catches up to them. Excellent writing. Clearly a lot of thought and effort went into writing this. Just earned yourself a new subscriber. :)

To start off, I absolutely loved this story! you are a fantastic author and the story's development was amazing. i felt truly empathetic with the characters pain... cant wait for the trilogy to be completed!

Wow. WOW. Not the usual kind of story I read, but REALLY well-written! Very nice! I can't wait to read the sequels.

i can't wait for the sequel! this was incredible!

I am really impressed with this story. Spent the whole day reading it start to finish.

Took me nearly 9 hours.

Anyways, I hope, nay pray, your working on a sequel because the suspense for this and Sought is really killing me. If you're not, I am going to be very angry. Might even hunt you down and make you make one.

Think about that while you're considering it.

Good work.

I'm so glad they're finally safe.

the love

this was an incredible story! i really loved it . my only question is: the ending is a little shaky, closure wise- so will you continue this in another story?

uuh! I cant wait for the sequel! *-* So have a good summer! (Its so weird for me to say that 'cuz is winter here ')

So one of those displaced endings okay get cracking on the sequel chop chop.

Wonderful ending! I love how it was from a dog :)

Have a great summer and I look forward to the sequel :D

I can't wait for the next story!