 TechNomaNcer28 9/5/11 . chapter 1WOOOW!just wow,so beautifully done,all of it!The confusion,the realizing all of it! |
 DecepticonDefenestrater 6/5/10 . chapter 1I like how you write Remus. |
 LabourXLove 10/2/05 . chapter 1woot |
 moonlit yew 8/29/04 . chapter 1i liked it. i'm a great fan of SOL, btw. anyway, just two small typos. these points didnt affect my opinion at all. i love the message this sends. very true and very sweet. great work. |
 foreverdebt 11/1/03 . chapter 1this is incredible
the feelings it evoked just made me wanna cry |
 Anonymous 2/25/03 . chapter 1 This is beautiful, deep and meaningful. You really put in the emotions and meanings behind the actions and stuff.
To quote the title, this is sophisticated. |
 Evangeline Henri 12/29/02 . chapter 1Dark, excellent story. Somehow, I liked it better than most of the everything-for-them-is-destiny-and-bliss pieces that most of us scribble away. This was different, and certainly interesting. Nice work. |
 Silkribbone 8/30/02 . chapter 1I'm Confused...
Oh Well, I liked it anyway |
 Bre 4/3/02 . chapter 1Wow. That was AMAZING... GREAT work. |
 Rebecca 3/17/02 . chapter 1 ok, well, at firt i was quite a bit..no LOt skeeved out with a remus/sirius slash, but it was really capturing... |
 Luthien Tasartir 3/13/02 . chapter 1Very descriptive, good job. |
 Blinky 3/1/02 . chapter 1 What a ficlet, Lady! This is gorgeous! |
 Aloe 3/1/02 . chapter 1 And when I ran across that one, I took them home and kept them. Good job. |
 Rage Point 2/25/02 . chapter 1On this my second reading, I'm reviewing. And either you revised it between Rage Reads 'Sophistication' Take One and Take Two or I read it too quickly, too distractedly the first time around. I'm thinking it's likely the latter. And it's all I can DO, DMP, to not leap up on the computer chair and whoop, "I TOLD YOU!" *grin* I'm so proud. Vivid, BOLD, and WIDE-eyed again. And all without EVEN cutting above a PG-13.
Brilliant. Bloo-dy brilliant, this was such a treat. As a slashfic... as a biscuit for anxious WbE readers... as an artwork... as a metaphor... God I loved the meaning in this. Higher sophistication indeed, oh yes. YES. I understand the ficlet completely but I can't articulate it any better than you yourself already have. It's so human.
So human. And that's really the highest compliment I could pay you. |
 Ruby 2/11/02 . chapter 1 The opening scene's the best. Great descriptions. I always wondered what Remy was up to when Sirius was locked up. |