WOOOW!just wow,so beautifully done,all of it!The confusion,the realizing all of it!

I like how you write Remus.

woot

i liked it. i'm a great fan of SOL, btw. anyway, just two small typos. these points didnt affect my opinion at all. i love the message this sends. very true and very sweet. great work.

this is incredible

the feelings it evoked just made me wanna cry

This is beautiful, deep and meaningful. You really put in the emotions and meanings behind the actions and stuff.

To quote the title, this is sophisticated.

Dark, excellent story. Somehow, I liked it better than most of the everything-for-them-is-destiny-and-bliss pieces that most of us scribble away. This was different, and certainly interesting. Nice work.

I'm Confused...

Oh Well, I liked it anyway

Wow. That was AMAZING... GREAT work.

ok, well, at firt i was quite a bit..no LOt skeeved out with a remus/sirius slash, but it was really capturing...

Very descriptive, good job.

What a ficlet, Lady! This is gorgeous!

And when I ran across that one, I took them home and kept them. Good job.

On this my second reading, I'm reviewing. And either you revised it between Rage Reads 'Sophistication' Take One and Take Two or I read it too quickly, too distractedly the first time around. I'm thinking it's likely the latter. And it's all I can DO, DMP, to not leap up on the computer chair and whoop, "I TOLD YOU!" *grin* I'm so proud. Vivid, BOLD, and WIDE-eyed again. And all without EVEN cutting above a PG-13.

Brilliant. Bloo-dy brilliant, this was such a treat. As a slashfic... as a biscuit for anxious WbE readers... as an artwork... as a metaphor... God I loved the meaning in this. Higher sophistication indeed, oh yes. YES. I understand the ficlet completely but I can't articulate it any better than you yourself already have. It's so human.

So human. And that's really the highest compliment I could pay you.

The opening scene's the best. Great descriptions. I always wondered what Remy was up to when Sirius was locked up.