| Reviews for The Omen |
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domo2010 7/30/12 . chapter 5Love it, more please. |
Loony-Luna-Lovegood-98 7/12/12 . chapter 1I really hope one day you'll update this! This story has alot of potential! |
Loony-Luna-Lovegood-98 2/11/12 . chapter 4OMG! Please please please update! I'm in love with this story! Your OC is wonderful! |
Jenny Joker 7/13/11 . chapter 5Wow this story just has so much going for it! I really hope you update soon :D |
XxAliBabyxX 6/20/11 . chapter 5Update soon I love it! |
Guest 2/25/11 . chapter 5 Why haven't u updated lately? It's great! I love it! You neeeeeed to update! |
Saphira-Dragon-Rider 1/6/11 . chapter 5Awesome story so far gotta love your Raven charcter she seems to fit in nicely with the boys. So cannot wait until you updated. |
Anime1Boy1Lover 12/21/10 . chapter 5love the story so far keep writing for others can know what happens farther in the story |
CutiePie 8/26/10 . chapter 5 Please update soon! :) |
MrsDamienThorn 8/22/10 . chapter 1 I read the whole story, it's sooooooooooooooo great! Raven's a brilliant character, she's so believable. The only thing you should work on is that she's sort of a MarySue. Other than that, you have the other characters down to a T. I love damien as is obvious by my username and because i'm a new user once my 3 day wait is over i'm gonna write soooooo mannny omennn storriees! Message me and maybe i culd hlp with your writers block |
Syrah-Celeste 8/14/10 . chapter 5Update! Update! Update! Have I said it enough times? I'll say it again:- Update! Update! Update! |
cam 7/30/10 . chapter 5 i love it!please update soon. |
Dan Sickles 7/22/10 . chapter 1I'm old enough to remember when these movies came out and I have to say you really capture the mood and the characters prefectly! Mark and Damien are just like I remembered, and I can totally picture Raven as exactly the kind of girl they would both be interested in. Even though she's your invention she totally fits the story! Annoying reminder - always take the time to spell check before you post! A mistake like Lucifer the Light Barer instead of Light Bearer can totally distract the reader from what's going on. And there are some mechanical mistakes to, really minor, like leaving out letters and stuff. This story is too good not to proofread! |
TheProphecyChild 7/11/10 . chapter 5Things are definitely getting interesting, aren't they? I can't wait for the next chapter! |
takara410 7/11/10 . chapter 5ohh goosbumbs |