I think that this is an intesting concept. I just have one suggestion. It might be beneficial to you to get someone to review it for grammer. It's hard to catch your own mistakes because you know what you mean to say. I found quite a few misspelling and such. It distracts from an otherwise enjoyable story. Keep writting!

Okay, I really like the concept, except it got a bit...dull after a while *cowards behind a chair* please don't hurt me! What I would suggest for future stories is elaborate on the actions like "one day at cody's house" and that stuff. It reminded me more of a script for a movie than a story, but it that's what it was suppose to be, then it was really good. I agree, Emily and Cody forevr! I'm gonna write a fic here too, so keep an eye out for it. Good job!

i dont mean to be mean but...you really need something other than dialogue