Bit of a punctuation and grammar issue. Nothing big (I'm not the best myself and it make me more concious of it) but I find it distracting.

Generally speaking without apostrophe is plural, with an apostrophe is posessive. So guest's ought to be guests in this case while evolutions ought to be evolution's.

That said, I adore the line about how hearing him speak was a guilty pleasure.

Oh, and peaked, rather than peeked. Peeked would be thr rest of the sanctuary watching through a keyhole ;)

Really, not rally. Without is a compound work.

illicitnot legal/not allowed/not approved of

elicitbring forth a response

Both could apply, but I think you use illicit when you mean elicit.

Nice work with the knife!

Gasped, not grasped.

That was realllly hot!

You know I'm a huge fan of your work and this story was no exception. It was excellent. Incredibly hot! I normally don't do the blood-play thing (unless its a vamp fic lol) but you balanced that element really well and I enjoyed that part...is it wrong to have enjoyed that :P.

I was a little taken agast when I saw this fic as I'm nearly done my own nubbins inspired fic. But not to worry they are not similiar...well except for the smut and nubbins.

Hey there,

Wow, great job, fantastic, magnificent, terrific, wonderful, stupendous, glorious and you have me hooked by my undies. LOL GREAT job, keep it up. I'm loving it.

Melissa

All I can say is WOW!