 Ridley Jack 10/27/05 . chapter 1Lol! Oh my Sandra! Just as I was getting desparate for a little something, pop, there you go! (And perhaps that wasn't the best choice of words) |
 Stardancer1 3/3/03 . chapter 1Ok now you are in my , 195 words? Very good and damn I love the last line! Evil, evil onna! |
 shime 8/26/02 . chapter 1...
WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THATS GREAT! |
 blacktears 2/11/02 . chapter 1awww...thats so cute! |
 Kasra 2/11/02 . chapter 1*jaw drops* That's a killer ending line! I *loved* it! |
 Ysabet 2/10/02 . chapter 1Whooohooooo... very, very clever; nice little play on words. Touching, but with that bit that makes you grin at the end- very subtly done! XD |