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Reviews for: Loyalty III: Aftermath
Cassandra30 8/12/05 . chapter 1
Woot! Want to really mess with Team 5's collective minds? There is a program out there somewhere like Outward Bound only to each executives and the like how to work as a team. Its a very tough boot camp thing. Its set up so you swing on ropes across deep ravines, cross streams, and stuff like that. It usually lasts a week. They camp out and eat unders the stars. They are graded on not only how fast they complete the obstacles and the tests thye are also graded on how well they work as a team and they usually have at least two teams for the competition level. The tests are not only physical but meant as mental and emotional challenges as well. The folks running the camp usually fit the tasks to the teams so that the course stretches the teams to the very limits and beyond. Imagine tests for undercover and sharpshooting and depending on each other in a wilderness where passing means living and failure is injury, where you need to depend on your team to live. I think that would be a fantastic idea. Teams 7, 8 & 5 with the reward being 2 weeks off with pay in I dont know Mexico or Vegas. Hee hee Buck would come back married! Hey Another great idea when Team 7 wins the trip to Vegas they all get a little too drunk and end up married. some to strangers some to their own girlfriends. Anyway I don't know the Teams (although there a few of Team 7 I wouldn't mind knowing a little better if you get my drift) so feel free to use the idea(s) if they strike your fancy.
Tidmag 4/10/03 . chapter 1
Hehehee...That was amusing. Kinda feel sad for certain members of team 5 though. Just cause they are shown what they could be like doesn't mean they'll make an effort towards it. I can see some of them trying a little bit more though, even if they quit soon after due to lack of response.

Great, but how about some more?

I would like to see if anything changes.
SLR 5/25/02 . chapter 1
Thank you so much for FINALLY adding a bit of closure. I almost got lost with all the different characters, but I managed. The story itself was more than worth a little confusion! Please keep writing, because I love the way you think!
Tinycoward 4/30/02 . chapter 1
Oh Man! Yeay! A third Team5 story. i was hoping there'd be another one of these... but don't give up on them now! I love those awful slime balls. Great writing, again, thanks for sharing it with us :0)
Rachelle Ryan 3/11/02 . chapter 1
I loved it I really did but is this really the end? Come on! You could do so much more with team 5. You've built up such a believeable set of people and now your done with them? I can't believe it. I can't. I want more. I need more. Please?
louisa 3/1/02 . chapter 1
enjoyed the set of three stories
Violette 2/11/02 . chapter 1
Great story, as usual. You really did create a bunch of interesting personalities in Team 5.

They are a bunch of bastards, but they're very well-defined bastards :-) So deliciously

obnoxious .
cassia 2/11/02 . chapter 1
I really love the different point of views you had going. It's a nice change of pace to read a Mag 7 story and not read the same ponts of view of the same characters.
MickiCelesta SunStar who doesn't want to sign in for a total of three minutes 2/11/02 . chapter 1
Nice! Another great story from Celeste, you disappeared for awhile there. Now that Team 5 has gotten a clue, what are they going to do? (Ahh, inadvertant rhyming! sorry)

I love how you can get into the guys minds like that and then turn around and show us. A wonderful offering, and keep up the marvelous work.
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