|Reviews for The Enoch File|
| Arthur Nathaniel Onymous 6/10/12 . chapter 3
This is one of those things where, if you know the meaning behind it, you are already beyond redemption.
Just a wild guess.
| kenlon 9/17/10 . chapter 3
Commissars and Kreig equals awesome. I dunno what it is, but . . . More! There aren't enough stories like these.
| Gear-2557 6/6/10 . chapter 3
Mr. Fluffles? Do I even want to know?
| Madork Gunna 5/26/10 . chapter 2
Nice. Next up we get to see what is on #83's dataslate?
| Obssesed Nuker 5/26/10 . chapter 1
If anyone could just walk into Mordor, it would be the Krieg wouldn't it? :p
The Steel Legion would have a good shot at it too, although they would probably just drive-in rather than walk.
Funny stuff, I like it despite the shout-outs being a might... obvious.
| SGT.CJC 5/25/10 . chapter 2
Yay! give us more give us more!
Glad to see your still writing, you went dark there for awhile.
This has an interesting format and is definately funny. Please keep going with it. It's simply superb as usual.
Keep it up.
FOR THE EMPEROR (hmph hee hempherphorph)
| Thermonuclear Cerberus 5/24/10 . chapter 2
Wow, lots of lolz in this update. Im glad I spent the last week on 1d4chan, reading all the old stories now. I love how many old jokes and refences you use.
| Nathan Huss 5/23/10 . chapter 1
Grr... wish there was the ability to edit reviews after posting them...
Ah well, my added comment is for this chapter anyway:
You have Enoch saying "...one of the three people here besides me with anything resembling a personality..." but only mention 9283-18 and 8273-45. Typo/goof on the "one of the three" or is there a third person who just isn't being mentioned yet?
| Nathan Huss 5/23/10 . chapter 2
I see someone's been reading /tg, or at least the archives of it.
Anywho, loved the recent Kreiger threads/stories in those, and this is rather true to the same spirit they were done in. Very nice.
Interesting that Enoch can decipher Kreiger-muffle accurately... though he might be more familiar with/used to them than I'm thinking. I'm probably projecting a bit too much of the Commissar from the /tg stories, who was a new appointee in that.
I take it that Enoch's surprise at 68e being female is more about being unable to tell that fact rather than the fact itself? At least since he didn't seem anything more than somewhat amused at 8273-45 in chapter 1.
In any case, looking forward to more.
| Gear-2557 5/23/10 . chapter 2
Hmmm... personality wise he definitely sounds like some one Cain would teach.
On a side note Centaurs are too small and its engines are too weak to be used for tank recovery, that job is better left for Atlas Recovery Tanks.
| mf 5/20/10 . chapter 1
very interesting, more please
| ArchAngelGundam 5/19/10 . chapter 1
Interesting start, but far from complete. Updates will be needed, but Toyhammer must also be maintained, just FYI. Looking forward to what the Kreigers can do and what will happen to Enoch.
| Pawnofhearts 5/17/10 . chapter 1
Easter eggs for the win!
Cain, Sturm (from toyhammer) Helm II Deep Tolkein system...
| cyko2041 5/16/10 . chapter 1
Excellent start man I honestly think the best part of this is his awkwardness to everything he's currently doing
| Gear-2557 5/16/10 . chapter 1
Its an interesting take on a commissar I must say, but as always you don't disappoint. However most Kreigers still have names even the clones (I think) so is this regiment one that is made up of 99.9% clones or is it just regimental tradition to be designated by number?