|Reviews for Circo de la Luna|
| Hitomi Kogure 10/1/12 . chapter 28
Wow, long time no see from this! Ahh, the hell that is school. I'm so with you on that one.
Excellent once again, Pikana. I love the little ZeldaSheik fluff going on (lol ShiShi, thats a nickname for one of my characters too!)
Also, if you need a beta, I could do it! I beta'd a few stories before, and this would be tons of fun! Let me know, darling
| kazikamikaze24 10/1/12 . chapter 28
Yet another fantastic chapter! The fight scene kinda confused me, but its still your unique writing style that has me hooked to this story. I say don't rewrite all of the old chapters, since they're grand as is in my opinion. Until next time!
| ADashOfInsanity 9/30/12 . chapter 28
I am still reading! Sorry about the slow roleplay replies (Uni is depriving me of computer time) but I’ll review this straight away! Also I’m still going to finish the sequel to Crossovers in Wonderland hopefully.
So Sheik has a ringing in her head that doesn’t stop…interesting. The noise must have something to do with her madness if she tries to deny it so badly.
Quick question. I need to re-read this back but I think Marth’s used ‘Oh my Yune’ or ‘Oh Ashera’ before. How does he know of the gods of Tellius? The gods of his continent aren’t really mentioned in his games, they certainly don’t have names. Yune and Ashera are Tellian (Ike’s games). He could’ve picked the curses up from the Ringmaster perhaps. Roy would go ‘Oh Elimine’ probably if you’re looking for holy figures from Elibe.
“already finding it difficult to keep in time to the woman's macabre tango”– I just picked this bit out because I really liked the phrase.
So a glimpse at a previously-caring relationship between the sisters! This makes their situation more interesting…can’t wait for the backstory of those two!
At least Peach survived, and the Ringmaster damaged Kirby! I wonder how he made sure Kirby could only say poyo?
Every chapter just leaves more questions! Please update again soon!
As for the rewrite question – I think you should focus on finishing the story and then go back and rewrite the bits you’re not so happy with : )
| Lays 9/30/12 . chapter 28
I would say that rewrites are more suitable after you finish a story. At least you know your own fic better by that time. Good luck with your exams!
| PhoenixLord05 9/30/12 . chapter 28
I think that the story is great and you don't have to rewrite at all! I know you'll do great on your exams if you just study and do your best! Good job and I really just want to say how amazing this story is! It is reaaaaaallllly amazing! Yoshi!
| Kat 8/5/12 . chapter 27
I read this story and it's awesome. It's different from all the other stories people have written. You're a talented writer and I hope you continue the story. Life may get you down but I hope you pull through.
| Multishipping-Extravaganza 7/7/12 . chapter 27
There are a lot of people here to support this story, it's amazing and it's really descriptive, and it has a very unique plot that not that many people have thought of..
Well, all i'm saying is that you're a talented artist and writer and this story should be continued..
Also, There are so many things that can happen in life, as they say, "Life is a rollercoaster" or did i mix that up? O.O
I hope you really do start writing this again
| Kirbella 6/26/12 . chapter 27
Actually, many people (myself included) still read this.
You shouldn't let things get you down. Rough patches in life can become stressing, but there will always be those people willing to lend an ear to listen to you and a shoulder to support you. We all go through tough times, but don't let them get to you. Keep holding on and don't give up. You are an amazing person, never forget that.
Don't judge your writing skills either, because you have a great talent. Many people would love to be as good as you, and many others love to read your creative pieces. You have so much skill and talent, and I know that the other reviewers agree with me.
I wish you all the best.
| Razcoolzle 6/24/12 . chapter 27
You may or may not remember me but that doesn't really matter. All I can say is that there are literally so many people who wish they could write like you (myself included), and by continuing to write these unique stories they are given hope and confidence in themselves. I just want you to know that you are a very valued person among the Fanfiction community. And never forget that even if you're feeling low, there are people out there who admire, respect and believe in you, even if you can't see them face to face.
On with the fic itself, despite being away from Fanfiction most of the time, I have been really enjoying this story when I do occasinally visit, even if it takes me out of my comfort zone...Which is a good thing :D. It's not hard to get emotionally attached to the characters you've created, even with some of their creepy natures. I'd love for Peach to finally find peace. I feel so bad for her with the lost of her husband and the only family she had for comfort.
I'm clearly not the only one who wants this to be continued, so don't give up on this or yourself! You're very talented. Not only do your reviewers love this but many others, like me, who are left too speechless to have anything coherent to say.
| Tune4Toons 6/13/12 . chapter 27
Well, finally got the chance to read this.
I like how emotional it is in this chapter. A family tearing apart in the seams, in rips and shreds. And the chains was a really gripping touch. Just /clink/, /clink/, to where you can hear it echo in your mind. Even if it takes a while, I do hope you will continue the story. Though life seems rough on you now, there's so much out there that is just waiting for ya to take hold of. These aren't meant to be empty words, same as to what others are saying as well. Cheers, and best of luck.
| too lazy to sign in 6/12/12 . chapter 27
This is really good! Every time I think of the brawlers, I think of these people. XD I really hope you continue this.
| Princess of Midnight 6/11/12 . chapter 27
I love your story! I don't know what you are talking about when you ask who still reads this, because this story is bloody amazing! Seriously, your writing is brilliant and one of the best stories out there. I am not usually that big fan of dark horror stories, except for movies, you make the character scary good. I love link and his half lion self and Zelda with her "i'm better than thou attitude." i am a trie link/zelda fan so hopeful she falls for him though i doubt it. peach is good too, it's sad how she is not in denial about the evil and bad of her "children" but does not see how she is at fault since she could stop it. Everyone else is good too:) I am sorry I have reviewed before and what is going on with you as well. I think you should give this story an ending
| Gamerofloz 6/10/12 . chapter 27
Hey, I know your going through a lot. It's fairly obvious from the author's note, but don't forget there are plenty of people to talk to if you need to, even if they are all on this site. Regardless, do keep up this story, I'm getting quite used to the more psychopathic look into the brawlers you're giving us. It's always fun to read when i see a new chapter appear in my inbox. So keep up the good work, and don't forget to vent to someone, be it on or someone in real life.
| IdaLunacyMusic 6/10/12 . chapter 27
Hey. I've been reading this fic from the shadows (translation: I've never reviewed this story until now). It's amazing. And beautiful. And...deep, in some way, of how it delves into the insanity and personalities of characters very well.
I guess life and exams can be rough...it hurts. I know that.
Whether you end this fic early or not, don't you dare give up on life, because that's the worst thing you'd want to do. Everyone gets down like this at some point in life, and you're no exception. Heck, I'm no exception either, I've cracked under the pressures of life too...
To be honest, though, I really do agree with Mystical, with not ending Circo de la Luna. This fic really is too good to put down, and ending it here wouldn't help with any of us.
I know you can get through this. Everyone can. You can get through this. Ask for help from others if you need it. Try your best to hold on. Keep holding on. You're going to make it through. I'll keep you in my thoughts. Mystical will, too.
Keep holding on. You'll make it through the tough times, Pikana...you'll make it through.
Keep holding on.
| Mystical 6/10/12 . chapter 27
Yo, Pikana! Mystical here...
Hey...you okay? Life's getting you down?
I probably have no idea what you're going through where you are. I probably don't. I know life sucks sometimes. I also know that exams suck, too. I've been depressed before; being picked on by other kids, being the one sitting alone at lunch, being yelled at by people who you didn't mean to hurt...cracking under pressure during tough times...I know it really hurts...
I'm sorry. It's hard for me to express such pain in words. But I can tell you that I've pushed through that depression over and over, no matter how hard things got.
Don't give up on this, Pikana. You're a strong, hard-core Pikachu loving, amazingly awesome fanfiction author. You've inspired me to write fics of my own, and not to be afraid to write fics that might be dark. Who knows, maybe I might even get a fanfiction account someday. And I'll be sure to credit you as one of the people that have inspired me...honest.
Please don't give up on Circo de la Luna, please. This story is too good to put down, and I'm sure you know deep inside, too. Don't give up. I believe in you. You can get through the tough times, too. Just..don't give up.
I believe in you.