Nice work, I enjoyed reading this story, even if i didn't like a few things in it, like misunderstood!Umbridge, or the strange sympathy from voldemort at the end.

Also, there where quite a few places where I felt that we are missing some interesting background information about your version of the AU, but oh well...

And last but not least, the unexplained "mystery" at the end about a certain "she" that apperantly harry have forgoten about.

I didn't really get it, it's not really a Cliffhanger, more like a private joke, except that it's not really funny for the average reader who have no idea what the hell is this all about...

All in all, Solid writing, interesting plot, and belivable OOC's.(evil!sirius black...)

So, Thank you, And I certainly hope to see a sequel for this story.

Loved it! Looking forward to reading more :)

Is there going to be a sequel to this?

I'm not entirely sure why, but one line of this stood out to me in particular.

"The part of Harry's mind that loved to be the center of attention, his inner showman, smiled predatorily."

You have really good descriptions. I think you described blood like oil earlier in the fic. They're quite creative, yet right on target. My only advice, to be honest, would have been to get a beta or someone to proofread - there are little spelling errors and the like liberally spread throughout the fic. But the fact that's the most constructive advice I can give means you're doing pretty awesome. The only reason I noticed them is because the story reads so smoothly, so it stands out when you hit a bump with something like spelling. The fact that we're from different countries could be part of it, as well. I also like the way you've done the AU. Most fics tend to be completely AU, or completely canon with one tweak. You've scattered several twists throughout, and truly made this your own world. Anyways, great job! :)

great story please update soon

This chapter has caused frustration and sadness to occupy my thoughts. After telling his past summer jaunt with Dumbles to a place of old magicks to half the riders on the train he couldn't be kind and honest to a sadden Luna making a simple inquiry of his Heliopath companion and offer to tell her as well personally. He also disbelieved somewhat the tale as well? Shame he has re-inserted into his arse that blockhead of his.

Gahhhhhh! This was so good!

I loved so much about this story. The way you tied everything in and left some open to be tied in later was masterfully done. I especially enjoyed Conlaodh's role in this story. And the way you had Harry's personality shift slightly because of Conlaodh's influence. I also thought your approach with Umbridge was very interesting and unique.

I am greatly anticipating your Book III. I can't wait to see who these other 2 are that are joining Harry and James (side point: "the family business" was so funny!) - I can't think of who Conlaodh could have meant by "she." I don't think it'll be Luna, it doesn't seem to fit into how you've written their relationship... but I can't think of any other girl in Harry's life that he might have "forgotten." Is the other person Ron?

Anyways, I love this story/series and I can't wait for the next installment )

lilah

really good

Hope you can get to the third (and final?) story in the series sometime soon. Again, excellent story!

I am incredibly annoyed that you didn't reveal who those two were... my bet is on Luna and Ron though... I though Umbridge for a second, but that seems REALLY unlikely. First sympathetic approach to Umbridge I've ever seen too, well played.

AWESOME STORY! Like the gravitas you've put into the Old Magic, very cool. Heliopaths are also now awesome in my book. There is something inherently BADASS about taking on supernatural monsters with a piece of string and your brain.

Can't wait for Book 3!

Wow. I will be honest. I've seen your stories all over DLP and have never actually tried to read them. Tonight, I finally decided to read this series and I am very glad I did.

These stories are, beyond a doubt, flawless. You're simply amazing at crafting together a world, a story, characters, conflict and conveying them in a style that is utterly remarkable.

Your original ideas inserted into the world of Harry Potter flow so well with the setting that you have crafted.

Throughout reading the Prequel and this story, I found my self mystified, awestruck, and constantly on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what will happen next. The last few chapters of this story were definitely nail-biting. I kept hoping and chanting that you would not kill Luna. I really loved the relationship you have crafted there.

The end of this story, an obvious cliffhanger, has me begging for me. However, I am going to guess that these two people are Ron and Luna?

At any rate, I will definitely check out anything else you write. Your stories are 100 percent under-appreiciated in the fandom.

-Myst

I can't wait to see where you take this in book 3.

Another great story, far different from the usual stories that are repeated here again and again. I look forward to seeing the next installment, whenever you should choose to write it.

Congratulation for completing it, can't wait to read the sequel

my brain hurts, but in an awesome way.