|Reviews for Outcasts|
| Guest 6/4/11 . chapter 7
2nd paragraph I think it's would not wold.
| Guest 6/4/11 . chapter 6
O.O Wow that chapter was freakin' fantastic! I loved it! Great action, interesting plot, and Burning Blaze! :D Yay! And now time to read the happy ending (I hope :) )!
| Guest 6/4/11 . chapter 6
In the part where Gardon puts Silver in the cell, I think it should be lay, not lied. Or maybe it's laid. I'm pretty sure it's not lied, but you may want to look it up.
| Guest 6/4/11 . chapter 5
O. M. Geez! Oh and in chappie 5 about half way down, it should be "we're" as in "we are", not "were". Eep! To the next chappie before I DIIIIIEEEEEEE!
| GonnaChaChaIt 6/4/11 . chapter 4
Gasp! What will happen next? Poor Blaze. Though she was kind of rude to Mercury. It's not his fault. But of course I want Silaze to win. Silaze 4EVA!
| Guest 6/4/11 . chapter 3
Teehee! I like how you described Blaze's fear of heights without actually coming right out and saying it. It's little details like that that make this so real and believable. You also do an excellent job revealing their personalities and describing their feelings. Yay for Silaze!
| anything170 5/27/11 . chapter 5
Oh, snap o sorry the story id awesome now where was I, o the guard part freak me out dude.
| fish-egirl 4/22/11 . chapter 7
(0o0)Silverdawn-san the integrity and the fluffyness of this magnificent stury is increadable! (0o0)
| GenericDude 12/2/10 . chapter 1
Truly a powerful and inspiring piece of writing! I'm going to give this one of my most complex reviews, because I just loved it so much that I just can't help but try to sound professional!
As far as criticism goes, there is only one thing I could really say, and that is perhaps the story is a little too short, in the area where Blaze discovers she is betrothed, I thought the character Mercury didn't have enough depth to him, and if you would have added a chapter or two about the two of them talking adn seeing what the two sides saw, then I thought it would have enchanced the story to an even greater level.
But apart from that, that's all the criticism, now here come the good points! Firstly, very well spell checked and barely any grammatical errors, (none of which I noticed anyway!), I thought the setting was great and I also thought that the main idea for the plot, of Blaze being a princess and Silver a recruit, was a truly great idea! I also liked the way that their relationship develops throughout the course of the story, there's just something about midnight meetings that makes me feel warm inside when I'm reading your writing! I also liked how it sort of intertwines with the Sonic series history as far as the Sol Emeralds are concenred, I thought covering that aspect and explaining how she became their guardian was a nice twist to the story!
Overall, I thought it was excellent, and it's stories like these that inspire me to keep writing stories in the hope that they would be anywhere near as good as yours. A job very well done, my friend! :)
| firerose9318 11/15/10 . chapter 7
This is the best freaking Silvaze story on this whole site, period! I loved the plotline and everything-for some reason it seems challenging to come up with one for Blaze and Silver, but you did it perfectly! Hope you write more of this couple, and again, great story _
| watching every sunset 8/21/10 . chapter 7
Okay, now that's done...
I absolutly loved it . Man, I love Silvaze XD. It was very well written and very believeable. I liked the act that it didn't actually include Sonic and co, seeing as a lot of Silvaze stories either often have a Sonamy or a Knouge backdrop or have a lot of OOCness. This didn't have either, which is why I loved it xD.
| Kingdaro 7/24/10 . chapter 7
BEST. FRIGGEN. STORY. EVER.
| Guest 7/2/10 . chapter 7
you shiuld do a story about knux and rouge next
| 01SonAmy01 6/7/10 . chapter 1
that was really good! I was up reading it till late and then i read the last two chapters as soon as i got back from school! This is really good, its a unique idea :D
| The Zestiest Pepper Ever 6/6/10 . chapter 7
WOOHOO! ILL BUG U ALL DAY IF U WRITE A SEQUEL!