Just watched the movie and reading this - excellent!

I really really enjoyed this! I adore this movie, more than I can ever say and was really thrilled to find this story! There should be more like it. I loved your writing style, I think you nailed the characterization perfectly. Anyway, loved it! :)

I was going to say something like : yay! walter is finaly in the story!

but it ended in a very sad note... though still beautifully written.

hmmm... nice, I like ;)

and this time I didn't see christian kane, it was robert duval that made me laugh.

Ahhh... so that's how the speech stated.

I like!

...*sigh*...

you are breaking my heart...

... I was afraid of what will I read when I reach this part of the story...

so, so sad...

oh, my God... this is so corny and full of kitch, but I love it!

Ahahahahahahaha!

could not stop laughing! Brilliant!

oh, so sweet!

and, my God, dude! you have a way with words!

"They were like the sun and moon, bound forever, though eternally different, filling the places the other left vacant."

Beautifull!

"Together, they shone like the sun"

Wow... just, wow. loved it, beautifull, man!

oh, man, the stuff of legends!

Ahahahaha! cute, and so funny!

nice, well written and I really- really loved the last paragraph:

"Because the day Hub arrived and found no note from his brother was the day the sky would fall and the moon explode. No commission would hold him any longer; vengeance would become his duty and his only aim. And then Hub would start on the true warpath with only two feelings in his blazing spirit as he set off in search: fury for whoever had dared lay a hand on Garth, and faith that his older brother would still be alive for him to find."

beautiful!

ooooh, nice intake of how hub started going after the slave-drivers.