holy moly!

I love Max Remy and this was just great. trip to memory lane. ah Max, Linden and Toby

Well I'm going to have to use that one day, "It's not me... It was the room!" Just like the doll house threw itself at you?

I really liked this. Despite his bluntness I always quite liked Toby and I think he was very realistic.

Very good! Loved it :D

I loved it! It's a simple one shot and even if I know nothing about Max Remy, I would still love it.

Anyway, it's a real shame there's very few Max Remy stories, I'd like to make one, but I've got to finish the stories I started first though.

Nice job, btw. I'd like to see more of these ;)

Haha! This is nice!

They were all in character: Max is clumsy and easily angered (and she would kill me if she read this), Linden is perpetually hungry and a nice guy, trying not to tick Max off, while Toby is almost the complete opposite, looking for ways to piss her off when Linden won't do it. And you already know all that.

Good job, and I hope you write more in the Max Remy fandom. :)

Haha. This is really good. Loved this: 'I'm not clumsy - it's the room, okay?' LOL. Great story.