wow a good fic

OMG! LOVE YOUR STORY! Please keep writing it!

I like this, it was short but I still liked it :D

definitely one of the best stories I have read. However, how did you get the idea? Curiously, you have not put a reason for this Pan there, nor explain how I arrive at shinobi world. You should have done long. You did a good job in the writing of history.

And maybe I'm not the only one who wants a continuation of this story. Although it depends on your possibilities.

please keep witing ths story is awsome pretty please its the best crossover ever pllleeeaaassseee :)

Oh! This is excellent! I would reeeally love to read where you take this story- please don't drop it! And I like that Pan's a super sayain.

nice.

I loved it.

very good.

nice work.

Nice this would be a good story if you wanted to do more I would like to see more of it like. How Pan got there and can she go toe to toe with Orochimaru.

I like it.

defeantly an intersting oneshot Mirai, if you do more of the fusions between these shwos itr will proably make for osme good humour oy have ninja going wide eyed at kunia knives boucing 9or shattering) unproteced skin. :)

Well, well... an interesting Story so far!

Sounds like Pan accidently landed in the world of Shinobi. And she's able to transform into Super-Saiyan. It's good, that the world of Dragonball and the world of Naruto aren't the same. I personally don't like crossover storys, where the worlds are merged into one.

I wonder, in which timeline of the Dragonball-world this story takes place? I guess it's a few days or maybe one/two years after the events of GT (of course only if accepted as part of the whole Dragonball story). I hope Pan will find a way to return to her family and friends.

To judge from the title of this fic, I guess Pan will be the only Dragonball character in this story. But I wouldn't mind, to see one or two more characters appear in this story, at least at the end of this story.

Well, I hope to read more of this story soon. It has potential, so keep up the good work!

Nun denn... eine interessante Geschichte so weit.

Klingt so, als wäre Pan durch mysteriöse Umstände in der Welt der Shinobi gelandet. Und sie ist in der Lage, sich in einen Super-Saiyajin zu verwandeln. Es ist gut, dass die Welt von Dragonball und die Welt von Naruto nicht die Gleiche sind. Ich persönlich mag keine Crossover-Geschichten, in denen die Welten zu einer verschmolzen werden.

Ich frage mich zu welcher Zeitpunkt diese Geschichte in der Dragonball-Welt spielt. Ich schätze mal, ein paar Tage oder sogar ein bis zwei Jahre nach den Ereignissen von GT (natürlich nur, falls sie berücksichtigt wird). Ich hoffe, Pan findet ein Weg zurück zu ihrer Familie und ihren Freunden.

Dem Titel dieser Fic nach zu urteilen, schätze ich Pan wird der einzige Dragonball-Charakter in dieser Geschichte sein. Ich hätte allerdings nichts dagegen, wenn noch ein oder zwei weitere Charaktere einen Auftritt haben werden, zumindest zum Ende der Geschichte hin.

Nun, ich hoffe bald mehr von dieser Geschichte lesen zu können. Sie hat Potential, also nur weiter so!

Wow this was good but will you be doing more to the story?