|Reviews for Land of the Unborn|
| TrueBloodxTwilight 3/1/12 . chapter 4
PLEASE keep writing
| Ollie912 2/19/11 . chapter 4
Great chapter :D
| Ollie912 1/1/11 . chapter 3
Interesting chapter :D
| MRS.waitforit.STARK 12/9/10 . chapter 2
will you yell at me if i write a story extremely close to yours? PM me IMMEDIATLY! i'll give you credit for the idea!
| fanpire24 7/28/10 . chapter 4
UUUHHHHH loved it!
| Addie-Bri 7/27/10 . chapter 4
please please please please update i love the story the plot is very original i can't wait for chapter 5 :)
| futurecullen26 7/25/10 . chapter 4
finally, u updated! great chapter, plz update faster
| fanpire24 5/27/10 . chapter 2
LOVED THE NEW REWRITE! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN ! :D
| futurecullen26 5/18/10 . chapter 3
I loved the last line. Great chapter.
| fanpire24 5/17/10 . chapter 3
I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY PLZZZZ HURRY AND UPDATE! SUCH AND ORIGINAL IDEA TO :D
| futurecullen26 5/15/10 . chapter 2
i luv ur stories. And BTW, have you ever noticed in the movies that when "Edward" kisses Bella his face is always scrunched up like he's concentrating on the kiss? I also agree: KS has NO emotion WHATSOEVER
luv the story.