Excellent chapitre, j'ai adoré la personnalité des garçons, la ténacité d'Edward, la compétitivité des deux garçons, leur masculinité, leur langage...Vraiment très bien écrit avec un bon rendu au niveau des émotions et du message passé.

A bientôt.

I love this story like cheap hookers in Vagas. It was wicked awsome.

Rev K

I don't mind either of those tho you know !

I don't think he needed much time or persuasion do you! loved it.

Thanks for sharing..

Both were great and it couldn't make the cut, especially the second one..

But nevertheless, the story itself was still awesome..

Great writing!

Very well written, I like that Edward backed off and gave Jasper time. Nice job ladies! C

Man! that was absolutely brilliant, loved this chapter..

This is really fun, but not quite the same level as the others—glad I got to read it anyway!

I like this scene! I don't find Edward too pushy at all, this is great!

I would really love more of this story, as in it becoming a full length story, do you have any plans for that?

Please write more

Oh Jasper *sighs and shakes head*

painful case indeed

Wow you guys! That was the hottest thing I've ever read. Well done. :)

OMG this was just so f*cing good. Best J/E one shot story I have read.

Ugh. Hot! Loved it!

I would love too bee in your Jazz's head for one day, it seems like a really interesting place too bee..

Lol