 thedorkygirl 12/30/02 . chapter 1ROCK ON! Go Susie! |
 Annie 12/11/02 . chapter 1 I love your Josh and Susan stories! When are you gonna write another one? |
 Katie D 2/13/02 . chapter 1 Awwwwwww. You write some of the cutest fanfics I've ever read. Very good, even if Diane is stupid. Keep up this little universe, because it's a lot of fun. |
 valentine 2/12/02 . chapter 1Wow, this is so very good. I really enjoy your characters and it's always lovely to have some Josh history (with Noah! Yay!) The end scene is just beautiful. |
 SMKLegacy 2/11/02 . chapter 1I have enjoyed your stories about Josh and Susie. You write your characters convincingly and with a lot of thought.
One comment that I would make technically is that a good beta reader or editor would catch the minor grammar errors (too, to, and two, etc.) that detract - only marginally! - from the presentation.
Please keep writing. I'm waiting for another J/S story. |
 Lucy Mars 2/11/02 . chapter 1 Ahh! I love these Susan and Josh stories! They've got this thelma/lousie thing going on...and it's JUST SO SWEET! ;] Now Bring On The Josh and Donna-ness! ;) Haha. ;] -lucy |