Really, why even bother to have an alert system if it doesn't work? :P

Anyway, this is so unbelievably adorable it's ridiculous. First of all, I love the song (Mariah Carey's version, anyway) and this is perfect for it. I lol'd at several places, and Toph's talk about swords was quite possibly the crown

jewel. XD The only thing maybe a bit off was Zuko exploding so fast, but I'll let it slide since it is (was) Christmas. And there was some bonus Toko, so it's all good. :D

Zuko is and always will be the most adorable character ever.

Oh, bless Zuko and his over-worrying tendencies! This was hilarious, and I felt the panic Zuko was feeling. Poor guy!

I think I've heard Fall For You...that actually makes sense, as far as Zutara goes. When you said 'Ashley Tisdale' the first time, I thought, wouldn't it be funny if this were the one song of hers I have on my iPod on which I read my fanfiction? And lo and behold, it was. I've never thought of this as Zutara, but it works.

This wa my first time reading a song fic while actually listening to the song, and I found it kind of distracting, but it did add to the mood. At the very end, I actually tried to sync the music to the lyrics you'd written. That made this whole deal pretty sweet. :)

I did crack up, at one point, though, when I imagined Katara and Zuko standing under a tree with a spirit/demon Ashley whispering in Zuko's ear. "Kiss the girl. Or elssssse. "

That would make for interesting fanart. XD

Another great fic from WP. (see, I like a shippy one every once in a while. :D) One thing I really like about your stuff is that Aang and Mai are actually treated in a way that's semi plausible. Less so with Mai, but still, it's not like: "Katara and Zuko were so super madly in love with each other. They were burning passion fires of yin and yang. So perfect!1! Omg! oh yeah and Mai got killed by some people and aang is totally in love with Toph now."

Lol, and the one and only typo (at least I think it's a typo) (that I caught) was, "He had never imagined she would smell that good. He was sorry when the smell of bark overwhelmed her personal smell and was going to pull her away again when HER legs curled around HER and he decided that the smelling could wait."

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I wonder where you always get all those great ideas. Brilliantly written as always...though it could have had a little more Zutara if you ask me

Oh my god.

Literally.

I was-am-practically sobbing my eyes out. Okay, maybe not sobbing, but I did tear up and my eyes hurt because I was staring so hard. My heart is still shivering, man.

This was-*snort*-all the words you could find to remotely resemble amazing times 54654395463263176432. I think this is even better than my In Between, though that's not exactly surprising-you manage to outdo yourself every day.

A question, though-are you SURE *I* inspired this piece of HOT DAMN? The shock hasn't hit me yet-like when you lose a relative or win the lottery. I'll wake up screaming in the middle of the night now. Thanks a lot. ;)

The fact that it was written (sort of) to Three Days Grace makes it all the better.

But seriously, I couldn't look away. COULD NOT. All the emotions, the pain that Zuko went through-I was wincing and feeling my nonexistent abs for heaven's sake. I loved this so much. I think I'm developing a Hurt!Zuko complex, woman. Geez. It was like a mini-story-in my esteemed opinion, I seriously think the creators would've paid you for this scene or something. No joke.

I also tried to fave it, but I already had. Darn. XD

Katara's thoughts and Hama's voice while she was bloodbending were &% %$)*((%&$# !&%(*&))(&*($%(_*(*_).

Need I say more?

I must say that this was an intense chapter. I thought either they both were going to die (or one), or Katara would kill everyone (excluding Zuko). Very exciting and angsty. I love angst!

PS The first episode of ATLA is available free on iTunes. My Facebook notification from "The Last Airbender: Legend of Korra" told me just a few minutes ago. Tell everyone!

Wow. That was deep. I thought for a moment that Zuko and Katara wouldn't get together and die alone. :(

very nicely done! love it!

poor zuko! ooo why did katara have to choose aang?

great song choice for him. and i like how you integrated the lyrics into the narrative.

Wow. This was amazing. I kinda wished something like this had happened in the show! :) I could just picture Zuko letting his overpowering rage or 'monster' taking over him, and then it slowly leaving him as Katara hugged him. It reminds me of how when Katara hugs Aang while he's in the Avatar State, consumed by rage, he returns to normal. So bravo, awesome job. :)

Oh wow! I can't thank you enough for actually spending some of your own time to write this for me! :) It means so much and warms my heart :D I'm glad it's not actually an Ashley Tisdale song. It's just her version of a Disney Classic, and I adore both versions so kudos to you. :DDD

Anyways, I really liked the 'no dialogue' take on this story. The song and Katara and Zuko's actions explain it all. I think dialogue would've overemphasized the point hm? The story itself was really simple but sweet and I loved it. So great job on writing! And I didn't find any mistake in the text so great job on the editing too! :D

Again, thanks so much for writing this. I hope everyone else can enjoy it as much as I did. :)

I like the lyrics as thoughts, but I think if you wanted to add in some dialogue that would be okay too. Yay! He finally did what we all wanted him to!

Ohhh, I love it! Katara is amazing.