Both hilarious and angsty at the same time, portraying Jack perfectly. Good job, you should DEFINATELY make more of these. I especially loved the parts where it was just a sentence of monologue. For example, "Good heavens, Gilbert, come out, it's just a kitten."

Wow. That was amazing. It's like you captured all we know of Jack and all that we don't in 50 sentences. It reminds me of all the reasons I like Jack. Faved!

Lovely. It's an interesting balance between lightness and the... burden you know is there with Jack.

Also, "To have and to hold, to love and to cherish - no, Gilbert, I am not marrying your brother and Alice." made me laugh. A lot.

Wow, I really like this :))) Should write a PH fic next XDD, But please, write more! ;)

To me this was not one puzzle piece short of an extraordinarily complex picture of Jack. Moments to laugh, cry, smile, and just…feel…

Well written and expertly phrased.

Thank you for this wonderful piece :)

Heh, this is one of the ONLY good fics in the Pandora Hearts section...I really like it :3

I liked it C:

My favorite was naked XDD

Oh my. I'm quite spellbound by a large number of these. There were ones that made me smile and laugh at how possible they were to occur in Jack's life (45, 44, 33, 31, 27) and ones that are just... I don't know how else to describe them short of extraordinary (29, 46, 48, and 50.. especially 50 and 29).

Val

#30 - amazing. Short review but I'm a little dumb struck by that sentence.

Ah, it's so refreshing to see something about Jack. He's so ignored. :(

Thank you for writing this! Nice mix of tragedy, humor, and touching moments of innocence: this fits Jack's character down to the last string.