hey, that's pretty gute. are you thinking of continuing it?

Don't tell me this is the end of story. Please don't stop. It is a really nice beginning

please update soon

I want more!

Twix

Update this story now!

good!

Awwww, kawaii! Update soon, please?

Very well-written. More please!

Hey Star! Good to see a DBZ fic from you :) Hehe, now you'll get to show the Dragonball fans your writing style. Nice prologue

That was really good! you have to keep writing more! I'll check back on this later

i like it! its very well written.

This is a very well written, heart-warming story. Please do more:)!

Grr, one day - one day... Just ONE MORE THING like that and I swear I will send the both of them to the NEXT DIMENSION, do you hear me?

that's only a prologue? loved it write A.S.A.P.