 hhxh99 2006-01-20 . chapter 1 Don't tell me this is the end of story. Please don't stop. It is a really nice beginning |
 Twixy 2006-01-14 . chapter 1please update soon
I want more!
Twix |
 DBGT Goku 2004-12-03 . chapter 1 Update this story now! |
 puff the magic dragon 2004-03-09 . chapter 1good! |
 Kazie Solo 2002-11-03 . chapter 1Awwww, kawaii! Update soon, please? |
 Angelfish369 2002-10-22 . chapter 1Very well-written. More please! |
 Nadz 2002-03-29 . chapter 1Hey Star! Good to see a DBZ fic from you :) Hehe, now you'll get to show the Dragonball fans your writing style. Nice prologue |
 Toki 2002-02-26 . chapter 1 That was really good!!! you have to keep writing more! I'll check back on this later |
 Shadow Spinner 2002-02-12 . chapter 1 i like it! its very well written. |
 Kameko 2002-02-12 . chapter 1 This is a very well written, heart-warming story. Please do more:)! |
 Vegeta-sama 2002-02-11 . chapter 1 Grr, one day - one day... Just ONE MORE THING like that and I swear I will send the both of them to the NEXT DIMENSION, do you hear me?! |
 shinigami(the one with 4 fics out all of which arent good or finished) 2002-02-11 . chapter 1 that's only a prologue? loved it write A.S.A.P. |