that was funny as hell and a little disturbing

Wow. No wonder Hope is such a ...troubled child...

I never laughed so much reading a fanfic in my entire life XD

Words cannot describe how much I lol'd. It's just so stereotypically hilarious. I'm glad I'm not one of those kids who walked in on their parents doing 'the deed.' I did walk in on my sister and her boyfriend when I was really little though, so I kind of know how they (should) feel. ;b

I'd like to see more stuff like this.

So, I don't know the characters, but ROFLOL OH MY GOD. (I like Snow. He's stupid. *shot*) Also I can totally relate with Hope, at least I didn't manage to see THAT many details...dear god.

Nicely done

This was hysterical. But don't you think Hope had a crush on Vanille? Like at all?

really funny without trying too hard (which is rare, especially on here, when people try to write something funny). your humor came from an awesome portrayal of the characters, which is the mark of good writing and storytelling in general. good job. seriously.

hahahaha this story was funny! loved it hope u do another Hope fic soon.

petty good story tossino :D i wonder if you will put more into it... xD

Haha ! Funny story, loved it

HA HA HA! I tried my hardest not to laugh since my dad was in the same room but I couldn't This was HILARIOUS! Can't wait to see the next chapter!...

... if you're making one...

YES! I was waiting for someone to write something like this! I love these kind of one-shots XD It's my guilty pleasure I guess.

Lol totally oblivious Hope, abusive Light, and wailing Snow.

While in the game, Hope seemed to show some understanding that a thing like girls exist, right now I can so totally picture him being like this. XD

Thanks for writing this,

Lady Midday