A great poem fic. Very good.

Great job, I really like it! You got the emotions, the fear, the doubts across very well. It's a wonderful piece of writing! Not too cheesey, but real. It's all wrapped up nicely in the last line, rounded off. Starts awesome, ends even better.

Just one spelling error: You wrote "...I here the Helmsmen say...", when you meant "...I hear the Helmsmen say...", but that's okay, it happens. It was just a one time mistake because you spelles "to hear" right the other time.

Beautiful, emotional piece. A mixture of poetry that's telling a story within it.

So sweet!

Sweet, this is really nice. I like it!

Nice poem... Go T/R!

Kewl! I love T/R.