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Aurora-Borealis Coyote 11/26/11 . chapter 1
This is really wonderful, and there are some really powerful lines that are very meaningful from Al's point of view-"(he has eyelids, and they work, they work) " I loved that one. It felt like it was Al's thoughts, it is a very nice look into Al's mind.
Qwi-Xux 6/12/10 . chapter 1
*happy sigh* I loved this, too. The thought of Alphonse using all of his senses again after so long is such a wonderful thing to contemplate, and you did this with such good humor and warmth.
Oakleaf 5/20/10 . chapter 1
Wow. That's one powerful story.

It may have an unique style but it's still really good.

Love tis angle of an Al with his body back.

Thank you for a great story.
Pumpkin2Face 5/19/10 . chapter 1
So absolutely fantastic! I loved this! If only I could be half as amazing as you when I write my review .
U.Ta.Ne 5/18/10 . chapter 1
Oh that was beautiful *A* Smooooth. Heartwarming ;A; OH AL! *hugs* Haha! Love this! :)
Orange Singer 5/16/10 . chapter 1
AWESOME.
Katsumara 5/16/10 . chapter 1
Haha. I wondered how Al would feel when he comes back to the plane of the living (WHICH HE WILL! )
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