cute idea, really liked it.

Okidok here is my crituque. Good use of the main story plot of Supernatural. Adding your idea of imbetween senes was a very nice touch. Considering Kripkie decided to leave them out for some odd reason. I particuarly liked chapter 5. Very good detailing. The ending could of used a little more work but other than that it was over all the best Dean/Castiel I have read in a long while. Thank you for wrighting a well payed out story.

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That was anti-climactic...and impossible...that would have torn Cas to pieces...have you ever heard of preparation? Lube?

This fic was so CUTE!abrupt but CUTE! The end was hot(although Cas needed some preparing before being penetrated) but mostly sweet.A mpreg sequel would be AWESOME!

Great!Fic!

I thought my face was going to burn off from the serious blushing that I was doing while Dean showed Cas how to pee!

Not bad. Your chapters are a bit short and things happen a bit too suddenly. Chapters 2 and 3 were already a part of chapter 1 so that is just confusing.

It's sweet how protective Dean is of Cas. Hope you update soon :)

Very cute, although way too short. _ Every moment with these two is adorable.

thanks for writing.

and you're welcome. *wink*

AW! Too cute! ;)

chapters 1-3 were pretty much the same thing. Just letting you know. _

AW! Cas is in LOVE with him! ;)

nugh. speechless. totally speechless. I can't wait for more!

YES YES YES! Shower scene shower scene shower scene! THis definitely needs a shower scene! Great chapter by the way.

Great story so far!

Thought this chapter was very funny LOL

The idea you've got is really good i think you should do that. It would be great to see them develop their relationship through the story.

Pls update soon! LOL xx

So I like what you have so far please continue