Cool...Please update.

AH!

NO!

Don't leave me there!

I want more!

I wanna know what happens!

Please write!

PLEASE finish! I'm obsessed with your writings! Let me know what happens next! I might die if you don't! I want to know the end of your other stories too!

pretty darn good, but is that the end?

Oh, I LOVE it!

Please, please, please continue it!

Trinity

Very good short story, although I think it would be really good if you continued as well. *hint hint*back at ya -

Oh, this is an interesting and different start. Poor Sarah, losing her job and her memory. It's very well written, and I'm looking forward to reading more..;)

Very intersting. I wonder what Jareth will do when he finds that she dosn't rember anything. Keep up the good work.