OMG when will the next chapter be up? I'm seriously addicted! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this, it makes my day :) I love Juggie&betty!3

loved it! Can hardly wait until u update!

Update soon please! I miss these two! :)

i love this story!

for one, it's so difficult to find betty/jughead stories.

even better, you write well. keep up the good work :)

Wow...that's all that I can think of. Just wow... This story is so amazing that I couldn't put it done. I mean, I read all of it on my phone, killing it about two of three times doing so. It was just that good that I had to find a computer, log on and leave a review.
This is beautifully done. The characters are dead on (though, I didn't mind it when it went out a little to OOC) that I could honestly picture this happening in the comic itself. As a kid, I remeber reading Archies Comics all the time and I was always rooting for Betty and Archie but as I grew up, i realized what a jerk Archie is to her. I never really thought of Betty and Jughead together but after reading this, I just became a Betty and Jughead fan.
Keep up the tremendous writing! And I can't wait until you update again.
-AR-

I read this all the way through and it's awesome! When you update can you have their relationship progress?

Hmmm... If Jug is going to MIT, I think Betty should go to Harvard. :)

This story is magnificent. It is an absolute treat. I have been DYING to find some good Archie fanfic and you delivered on all accounts. The way you captured the characters and their inner monologues as well as their converstions is so realistic. Job fantasticly done.

I know you think this didn't go right, but I absolutely love the contrast between the Archie/Jughead and the Veronica/Betty situations. I've always felt that no matter what, Betty and Veronica were the best of friends, that their on-the-surface rivalry belied a deeper understanding of each other. I'm so glad to see that reflected here.

I was so excited when I realised you had started posting more chapters again - I had been worried that you might've forgotten about this one! I have got tell you that this is my favourite Archie comics fanfiction and I'm enjoying the plot and the way you've kept the characters 'in character' as much as possible for this kind of pairing. Betty and Jug are my favourite pairing by far but some writers make them far too OOC to bother calling them Betty and Jug, but you have definitely done well in this area particularly :)
Another thing I would like to commend you on is the way the chapters flow in and out of action and through different perspectives without being boring or too fast - this balance is something I rarely find and you have kept it well.
I'm also enjoying the way you're building up the sexual tension slowly rather than jumping in the deep end like most authors do.
I just want you to know what a fantastic job you are doing and that your work is greatly appreciated .

Awww! They are soo in love with each other, why don't they just admit it? :))

Yay! Another update! You don't know how happy you make me whenever I check my email and see a new update for this story...it's like a kid getting excited to open presents on xmas day! Hehehe... :)

Anyway, I really really enjoyed the first half of this story. Jughead and Betty are sooo cute together. The image I had when they were having picnic looked so romantic and intimate! Can't wait for the next one.

Yay, new chapter! It's nice that Veronica and Betty are great friends! But it would be weird if they weren't - they were friends when they fought over Archie, and now when they don't have to fight anymore, so, makes sense. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter :) This is going great :)

Awww... I hope Jughead comes to his senses soon! :))

"Holding hands with Jughead in public was a different kind of comfortable she never wanted to get used to. There was nothing like the novelty of being with someone who actually wanted to be with her and only her. And, to have people actually see Jughead willing to spend time with her . . . it was enough to keep her flying on cloud nine for a while."

- That is truly adorable. The thrill of new love never getting old. **sigh**

Sunshine and Juggie! Oh how I wish these two would get together in canon and have their own comic book called 'Sunshine and Juggie'. Because I'm so tired of the Archie/Ronnie/Betty love triangle, it belongs back in the classic 70s comics but Betty needs to be her own woman now, and stop wasting her precious time on that self-serving jerk Archie.

'A few minutes before the bell could bring an end to lunch time, his fingers would card her fringe back, a jazzy beat vibrating in his chest as he hummed a tune only he could hear.' - Sublime :)

She was so proud of him.

(And, he enjoyed every bit of her pride after she had pinned him to her front door for a small celebration of their own.) - Yowsah ;p

"Please remind me to thank Smithers for doing this. He still hasn't told me what kind of fabric softener he uses on these things."

"Pulease. That man will not tell you, just drop it!" - Smithers and fabric softener- I literally lol'ed out loud. Love how you write Ronnie, too. Perfectamundo.

'Settling herself in her chair, Veronica made a show of adjusting herself and widening the collar of her robe to show the light swell of her breasts without seeming too slutty.' - FAIL. Lol. What? And Christoph, OMG. What a cheezefest.

Veronica did not miss the note of frustration in her statement. "Slow, eh? And, by slow . . . you mean?"

Betty tried not to blush. "Ronnie . . ."

It's ok Ronnie, we're all waiting for it! OK. *I'm* waiting for it. But I'm sure I'm not the only one ;)

"Betty. We are beautiful women. We have needs. You and I both know that we have gone much further than simple hand holding or an asinine game of footsie during a dinner date with Archie." - NEEDS! Like your readers, ahem :D (But yeuch, Archie...)

'Betty knew exactly how many times she has felt Jughead just pin her against something and really kiss her. All with the touching and the possibility of skin and the need for just more.
...And those three make outs? They were really hott. Was it so horrible that Betty wanted a little more of that? And, maybe a little less clothes?'

- Oh, myyy. OH. MYYY! Yes please, if you could see your way to writing some of that... *puppy dog eyes*

Betty groaned. "God, I am a pervert." - Join the club, baby. You get used to it :)

Betty wanted to know exactly how in the world she was getting the 'relationships are a two-way street' lecture from Veronica Lodge: SELF-CENTERED GIRLFRIEND EXTRAORDINAIRE. - Good point, well made. Ronnie just wants the goss!

"Look at me. I know for a fact that if I am happy, and beautiful, and pampered, it makes the boys that much happier to be in my presence! And I like being happy, and beautiful, and pampered, so it's a very smooth two-way street!" - Yikes, there's an uncomfortable truth in that. Sadly, for those of us who aren't beautiful and pampered, we get to grow old in a house full of cats. (Not me. I have a dog. :) )

"I hate seeing you cry or be hurt when there is something I can do about it." She sat back with a grin. "Besides, now that we can be bffs without the added tension of romantic competition, I can be as supportive as sickeningly possible! You have yet to see my best-friend prowess!" - RONNIE! She's insufferable and unstoppable. But strangely, rather likeable. In small doses. (Very small doses. Not as small as Archie though.)

Christoph returned with a bowl of scented mud mask. "I would not mind assisting with the sexual tension? I hear I am very good at relieving that stress as well?"

"Christoph. Shut up and mask me."

- Bahahahahahahaaaaa! Perfect ending to a very enjoyable chapter indeed. OMG. Don't let this story ever end. Even if you're still adding chapters every couple of years when you're 60, I still expect to get email notifications for the next 50 years. By which time hopefully Sunshine and Juggie will be married with children and still doing it on the kitchen table. ;P